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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（2024）Unit 3 The seasons
专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．李华最近交了一个美国笔友。下面是他的笔友George给他的来信的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以李华的名义回信。
My favourite season is spring because I can see beautiful flowers and enjoy the pleasant weather. Now I want to ask you some questions. What is your favourite season Why do you like it What do you usually do in that season
要求：
（1）信件中须回答所给信件内容的三个问题，可适当发挥；
（2）信件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数60左右（格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear George,
I’m very happy to receive your letter.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是李华，请以“My Favourite Season”为题写一篇演讲稿，参加《英语周报》举办的演讲比赛。
提示：1.你最喜欢的季节；
2.该季节的天气状况、景色变化，人们的活动；
3.你喜欢参与的活动。
要求：1.必须包含所有提示要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称等信息；
3.不少于60词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Season
I am Li Hua. I am happy to give a speech about my favourite season here today. My favourite season is
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
3．假设你是 Bobby，你所在的城市叫做“Sunshine City”，你的英国笔友 James计划明年来你的城市旅行。他在给你的邮件中询问哪个季节更适合旅行。请你根据提示完成回复邮件。
内容包括：
1. 推荐季节；
2. 推荐的理由（该季节的天气、活动、节日等）；
3. 祝福与期待。
要求：
1.词数：80—100左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不要出现人名、地名及学校名称等真实个人信息。
Dear James,
I am so happy to receive your letter and to know that everything is going well. In your letter, you want to know about the best season to come to Sunshine City. _______________
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Yours,
Bobby
4．某英文报正在举行以“家乡(hometown)美”为主题的征文活动，你打算以“Spring in My Hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示：
1. What is spring like in your hometown
2. What do people in your hometown usually do in spring
3. 词数：不少于60 词，开头已给出，不包含在总词数中。
Spring in My Hometown
I like spring very much.
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5．假如你是李华，今天英语课上班里各小组分享了“最喜欢的季节(My favorite seasons)”，以下是你们小组成员的分享内容。请你作为小组代表做英语汇报，根据以下 提示写一篇英语短文。
组员 最喜欢的季节 原因 心情
Ben 春天、秋天 气候舒适、外出野餐 充满希望的、感恩的
Jenny 夏天 去海边、暑假旅游 欢乐的
Li Hua (自行补充1点) (自行补充至少2点) (自行补充1点)
写作要求：
1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内，要根据要点提示适当发挥； 2.书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等真实信息，否则不予评分。
参考词汇；
火锅 hotpot 感恩的 thankful
Our group members have their own favourite seasons.
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We’d like to discover more features of the four seasons. Let’s explore together.
6．假如你是李辉，你的美国笔友Jeff来信向你了解沈阳的春天，请给他写一封回信。
内容要点：
1. 天气变化； 2. 人们的活动； 3. 邀请来沈阳。
要求：
1. 词数60～80，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
Dear Jeff,
You told me that you are interested in the spring of Shenyang and I will tell you something about it.
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7．假设你是李华，今年9月成为一名初中学生。请根据以下要点，写一封电子邮件给你的美国笔友Tom，从现在的季节、新朋友Jack、校园生活等3个方面分享你的近况。
要点
现在的季节——秋天 广州的秋天……
新朋友Jack 1. Jack乐于助人且有耐心。他擅长…… 2. 在他的帮助下，我……
校园生活 1. 我们的科目有…… 2. 老师…… 3. 我的感受
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
3. 词数70词左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How is it going I started junior high school this September. I am writing to tell you about my new life here.
It’s autumn in Guangzhou now.
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Thank you for reading my email.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．广州是一个气候宜人且舒适的城市，四季都有各种有趣的活动。请你根据下面的表格提示，谈谈广州四季的天气、活动和你最喜欢的季节及原因。
季节 气候 活动
春天 暖和潮湿，红花绿树 活动自拟 (每项1~2个)
夏天 炎热多雨，蓝天白云
秋天 凉爽干燥，落叶纷飞
冬天 寒冷多风，仍见百花
请说出你最喜欢的季节及原因(至少两点原因)
注意：
1.词数80以上(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.要点齐全，语言通顺连贯。
Seasons in Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a pleasant and comfortable city. There are a lot of rich and colourful activities for us to take part in. Let me tell you something about it.
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9．假如你是李华，国庆节期间，你和父母打算去某地旅行，游览风景名胜，感受特色文化。你的英国朋友Dave对中国文化很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件，介绍你对该地的了解。
提示：
1. 位置；
2. 天气；
3. 景点；
4. ……
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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10．假如你是李华， 你校英语社团公众号以“The Most Beautiful Season in Beijing”为主题做系列推送，请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中北京最美的季节。
注意：
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数70词左右(短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入词数)；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
The Most Beautiful Season in Beijing
Each season in Beijing has its special beauty and features.
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11．假如你所在的英语俱乐部下周要举行演讲活动，主题是“我最喜欢的季节”。请你根据下面的提示问题，用英语写一篇短文为这次活动做准备。
提示问题：
1. What’s your favourite season
2. What’s the temperature and what’s the weather like in this season in your hometown
3. What things can you do in this season
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确；
2. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 词数： 不少于60 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everybody. Of all the seasons, I like ______________ best.
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12．你们班最近就“最喜欢的季节”展开调查，以下是你们小组成员的调查结果。请据此写一篇英语短文。
组员 最喜欢的季节 理由
Ben 春天 气候温暖，到处都是鲜花绿树
Joe 夏天 可以游泳，和家人到海边度假
Kim 秋天 适合野餐和爬山
I
写作要求：
1．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．书写要整洁、规范；
3．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Our group members have their own favourite seasons.
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13．四季的轮回变化给我们的生活增添了一抹绚丽的色彩！不同的季节、不同的天气、不同的景色，是否使你的课外活动也更加丰富呢？请根据以下提示以“My favourite season”为题，用英语介绍一下你最喜欢的季节。
提示：
1.说明自己最喜爱的季节；
2.阐述你喜欢这个季节的原因，例如：
(1) 这个季节的天气和景色特征；
(2) 你可以做哪些活动。
要求：1.80词左右；2.语言表达准确，语义连贯，可适当发挥。
My favourite season
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14．假如你（Lingling）的英国笔友Jim要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最佳时间等。请你给你的笔友写一封80词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad that you’ll come to visit China.
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I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Lingling
15．今天英语课上班里各小组分享了“最喜欢的季节”，以下是你们小组成员的分享内容。请根据提示写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
组员 最喜欢的季节 理由
Ben 春天 温暖，鲜花绿树
Joe 夏天 去海边……
Kim 秋天 野餐、爬山
I ？ ？
写作要求：
1.词数70左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内，要根据要点提示适当发挥；
2.书写要整洁、规范；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Our group members have their own favourite seasons.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear George,
I’m very happy to receive your letter. My favourite season is autumn because I enjoy the cool weather and the golden leaves. It’s a great time for hiking and enjoying nature. I like going to the park to relax or having picnics with friends. Autumn is also the harvest season, so I often help my family pick fruits in our backyard. What about you Do you have any activities you love in spring Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍喜欢的季节以及原因；
第二步，介绍活动。
[亮点词汇]
①relax放松
②having picnics野餐
③harvest season丰收的季节
[高分句型]
My favourite season is autumn because I enjoy the cool weather and the golden leaves.（原因状语从句）
2．例文：
My Favourite Season
I am Li Hua. I am happy to give a speech about my favourite season here today. My favourite season is spring, and let me tell you the reasons.
I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season. There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold. People start to do sports outside after a long winter, and some children fly kites. I also like flying kites because I think it is interesting and fun. In spring, I also go to the park to go for a walk. There are many cute and lively animals in the park in spring time.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我最喜欢的季节，这个季节的情况介绍，我在这个季节所做的事情”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢的季节是什么，喜欢的原因，以及介绍春季人们的活动情况等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多
②go for a walk散步
[高分句型]
①I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season.（省略that的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold.（there be句型，and连接的并列句）
3．例文
Dear James,
I am so happy to receive your letter and to know that everything is going well. In your letter, you want to know about the best season to come to Sunshine City. I think the best season is autumn.
Autumn here starts in September and lasts for three months. It is usually cool and dry. Leaves turn red, yellow or brown. It is nice to see them falling from trees. They make the whole world colorful. People usually go on a picnic at this time of year. The Mid- Autumn Festival falls in this season. It is a time for people to get together and enjoy the full moon at night. People also eat a traditional Chinese food called mooncakes.
I hope you can have a nice trip here. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Bobby
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，推荐季节；
第二步、介绍推荐的理由，如：该季节的天气、活动、节日等；
第三步、表示祝福与期待。
[亮点词汇]
①last for持续
②go on a picnic去野餐
③at this time of year每年的这个时候
④get together聚在一起
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I think the best season is autumn.(省略that的宾语从句)
4．范文
Spring in My Hometown
I like spring very much.
When spring comes, everything comes back to life and it becomes warm. Everything is green. Most flowers start to come out.
People can have a picnic near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try to be close to nature and have fun. Farmers work in the fields and they are full of hope.
Spring in my hometown is beautiful. I love this season. Welcome to my hometown!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出文章的主题；
第二步，介绍家乡的春天是什么样子以及人们在春天做什么；
第三步，发表自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①come back to life恢复生机
②close to nature亲近自然
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
① When spring comes, everything comes back to life and it becomes warm.（when引导时间状语从句，and连接的并列句）
5．例文
Our group members have their own favourite seasons. Ben likes spring and autumn because the climate is comfortable and he can go out for a picnic. In these seasons, he feels hopeful and thankful. While Jenny enjoys summer because she can go to the seaside and travel during the summer vacation. She is happy in summer.
In my opinion, I like winter best. The snow-covered scenery is very beautiful. And I can eat hotpot with my family. It makes me feel warm and satisfied.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步、逐个阐述组员以及自己最喜欢的季节、理由以及心情；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go out出去
②in my opinion在我看来
③like…best最喜欢……
④satisfied满足的
[高分句型]
Ben likes spring and autumn because the climate is comfortable and he can go out for a picnic.(because引导原因状语从句)
6．例文
Dear Jeff,
You told me that you are interested in the spring of Shenyang and I will tell you something about it.
In spring, the weather gets warmer and the trees turn green. People take off their heavy winter clothes and start to go outside. It’s a good time to have a picnic or fly kites in the park. The temperature is neither too hot nor too cold, so it’s perfect for outdoor activities. I would like to invite you to come to Shenyang in spring. You can experience the beautiful weather and enjoy the outdoor activities with me.
I’m looking forward to your visit.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍沈阳春天的天气变化；
第二步，介绍人们的活动并邀请对方来沈阳；
第三步，书写结语，期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①take off脱下
②have a picnic去野餐
③neither...nor...既不……也不……
④would like to do想要做某事
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It’s a good time to have a picnic or fly kites in the park.（it的固定句型）
7．例文
Dear Tom,
How is it going I started junior high school this September. I am writing to tell you about my new life here.
It’s autumn in Guangzhou now. It is neither too cold nor too hot. Leaves turn yellow and the scenery is very beautiful. I have a new friend. His name is Jack. He is very helpful and patient. He is good at English. And with his help, I make great progress in English. We have many subjects this term, such as Chinese, maths, English, history, physics, chemistry, music and art. Our teachers are very friendly and kind. They often help us when we have trouble. I feel very busy but great every day.
Thank you for reading my email.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容从现在的季节、新朋友Jack、校园生活等3个方面分享你的近况，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，从现在的季节、新朋友Jack、校园生活等3个方面分享你的近况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①neither...nor既不……也不……
②be good at擅长
③make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
They often help us when we have trouble. (时间状语从句)
8．例文
Seasons in Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a pleasant and comfortable city. There are a lot of rich and colourful activities for us to take part in. Let me tell you something about it.
Spring is warm and wet, with red flowers and green trees. People like to enjoy the beautiful flowers in the park. Summer is hot and rainy with a blue sky and white clouds. People like to go to the beach and swim in the sea. Autumn is cool and dry, and leaves are falling. People often climb mountains or go hiking. Winter is cold and windy, but flowers are still seen. In winter, there are many wonderful activities, such as visiting Guangzhou Chimelong Xiangjiang Safari Park.
My favourite season is summer. I can go on a picnic with my friends. We can go swimming, too.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述四个季节的特点；
第三步，谈论自己最喜欢的季节及其原因。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②take part in参加
③go hiking徒步
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of rich and colourful activities for us to take part in. (There be句型)
②Let me tell you something about it. (祈使句)
9．例文
Dear Dave,
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad to tell you about my plan for a trip to Guangdong during the National Day holiday.
Guangdong Province lies in the south of China. The best time to visit it is in autumn, because it’s really cool and we can just take some light coats. There are many famous places, such as Mount Danxia where we will see many special rocks. What’s more, you can go to Guangzhou and Foshan to experience the rich traditional Cantonese culture. Then you can also taste the delicious local food. As a fan of Chinese culture, I’m sure to watch a performance of Cantonese Opera.
I’m looking forward to the trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干的提示信息完成写作，内容涉及该地的天气与景点等。注意用词准确，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，点明旅游地；
第二步，从该地的位置，天气、景点与文化等方面具体阐述；
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb about sth告诉某人某事
②lie in 位于
③look forward to 期盼，期望
[高分句型]
①I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad to tell you about my plan for a trip to Guangdong during the National Day holiday. (宾语从句)
②The best time to visit it is in autumn, because it’s really cool and we can just take some light coats. (because引导的原因状语从句)
10．例文
The Most Beautiful Season in Beijing
Each season in Beijing has its special beauty and features. I think the most beautiful season is spring. Spring is colourful at this time of year. Nature wakes up. Many plants start to grow, such as trees and flowers, and they make this season beautiful. It’s also a time of new life and new hope.
It isn’t too hot or too cold in spring, so we can do some activities outside. For example, it’s interesting to climb mountains or take a trip. We can see different kinds of beautiful flowers and grass. We can also hear birds singing in the trees.
I like spring in Beijing best, because it’s the most beautiful season in my heart.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍北京最美丽的季节，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤 ]
第一步，介绍北京最美丽的季节是哪一个季节；
第二步，介绍什么让这个季节美丽以及在这个季节里可以做什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①wake up 醒来
②such as 例如
③different kinds of 不同种类的
[高分句型]
①I think the most beautiful season is spring. (宾语从句)
②I like spring in Beijing best, because it’s the most beautiful season in my heart. (because引导的原因状语从句)
11．例文：
Hello, everybody. Of all the seasons, I like winter best.
The temperature in winter in my hometown is usually between -10 and -5 degrees. It’s cold and it snows from time to time. When it snows, I can make snowmen with my family. I love to enjoy the beautiful snow scenes as well.
I often go to a park to take lots of photos on snowy days. Winter is also a good time to go skating. At weekends, I often go skating with my friends. Although it is cold in winter, I can always have lots of interesting things to do and have a good time.
Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示问题进行写作，注意要点衔接自然顺畅，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己最爱的季节；
第二步，介绍这个季节的温度及能做的事；
第三步，结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①between...and...在……和……之间
②from...to... 从……到……
③take lots of photos拍很多照片
④have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①When it snows, I can make snowmen with my family. （When引导的时间状语从句）
② Although it is cold in winter, I can always have lots of interesting things to do and have a good time. （Although引导的让步状语从句）
12．例文
Our group members have their own favourite seasons. Let me tell you something about them.
Ben likes spring best because it’s warm and there are beautiful flowers and green trees everywhere in spring. Joe’s favourite season is summer. Summer is hot. It is exciting to go swimming in summer. He can also go to the beach to build sandcastles with his family during the holiday. Autumn is the best season for Kim. It is cool, so it’s a good time to climb mountains and have a picnic.
As for me, winter is the best season because it’s great fun to make snowmen with friends!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的重要信息，围绕主题“最喜欢的季节”进行写作，写作时可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由给出的开头提示引出本次写作的主题“最喜欢的季节”；
第二步，逐个阐述组员最喜欢的季节及理由；
第三步，补充自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①go to the beach去海边
②with his family和他的家人
③a good time to do做某事的好时间
④have a picnic去野餐
⑤As for me就我而言
[高分句型]
①Ben likes spring best because it is warm and there are beautiful flowers and green trees everywhere in spring.(原因状语从句)
②It is exciting to go swimming in summer. (it固定句型；不定式作主语)
13．例文
Autumn is my favourite season. The weather is cool and not too hot, which is perfect for playing outside. The leaves on the trees change to beautiful colours like red, orange, and yellow. It looks like a rainbow has fallen on the ground.
In autumn, we can go on hikes and see the pretty leaves all around. The air smells fresh, and the sky is very blue. We also have the Mid-Autumn Festival, where we eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon. It's a time for family and friends to gather together.
I love autumn because it's a season of change and it's so pretty. It’s a great time for outdoor fun and enjoying the cooler weather.
【解析】[总体分析]
1.题材：本文是一篇说明文；
2.时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
3.提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中喜欢这个季节原因的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，说明自己最喜欢的季节；
第二步，说明喜欢该季节的原因，从“天气、景色特征和活动”几个方面重点介绍原因；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对这个季节的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
1. look like 看起来像
2. go on hikes 去远足
3. enjoy the full moon 赏月
4. gather together 团聚
[高分句型]
1. The weather is cool and not too hot, which is perfect for playing outside. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
2. It's a time for family and friends to gather together. (“It’s a time for...”句型)
14．参考范文
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad that you’ll come to visit China. I will tell you something about the weather in China. There are four seasons in a year—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It’s often rainy. Compared with the other seasons, winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, and you can come at this time of the year. But it depends on you. I think it is best to visit China in spring or autumn because the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Lingling
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中中国的气候特点的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你给你的笔友写一封80词左右的信，介绍一下中国的气候特点。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国的天气情况、来中国的最佳时间、希望早点来等”几个方面重点介绍中国的气候特点的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望你能快点来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb about sth告诉某人关于某事；
②compare with与……比较；
③depend on依靠；
④neither…nor…既不……，也不……
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons in a year—spring, summer, autumn and winter. (“there be”句型)
②Compared with the other seasons, winter is the coldest. (过去分词作状语)
15．例文：
Our group members have their own favourite seasons. Ben likes spring. It is warm and there are a lot of beautiful flowers and green trees. Joe likes summer. Because he likes going to the beach and swimming in the sea. Kim likes autumn because he likes going to the picnic and climbing the mountain. I like spring. I can go out and play without feeling cold. In spring, I can also wear my new clothes and go to the park to fly my kite. I like spring best.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的重要信息，围绕主题“最喜欢的季节”进行写作，写作时可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由给出的开头提示引出本次写作的主题“最喜欢的季节”；
第二步，逐个阐述组员以及自己最喜欢的季节及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②go to the beach去海边
③go to the picnic去野餐
④go out外出
⑤like...best最喜欢
[高分句型]
①Kim likes autumn because he likes going to the picnic and climbing the mountain.（原因状语从句）
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