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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版
（五四学制）（2024）Unit 3 Jobs
专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．某英文杂志正在为其“colours”专栏招募小记者，假如你是Shirley，你想应聘该职位，需要向主编Mr. Smith提交英文自荐信。请根据以下提示和要求写一篇自荐信。
1. What is your personality
2. What colours do you like best Why
3. Why do you think you are suitable for this position
注意：内容需包含所有要点，词数不少于90，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to recommend myself to be the reporter of your magazine.
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Yours sincerely,
Shirley
2．你对未来职业的憧憬是什么 请你以 “I want to be a/ an _________” 为题写一篇短文。词数: 100词左右 (已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。
提纲 回答
What is your dream job
Which motto (座右铭) encourages you most
Why do you like this job
How will you get your future dream job
I want to be a/ an _________
I have a dream. I want to
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3．我们每个人都有自己的梦想和喜欢的职业，为了实现自己的梦想，我们都在努力学习、工作、拼搏、奋斗。请你以“I want to be a/an ____”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的理想。写作要点：
1. 你的梦想的职业是什么？
2. 你为什么喜欢它？
3. 为了实现梦想，你会怎么做？要求：
1. 词数为80词；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：come true (实现梦想), study hard (努力学习), meaningful (adj. 有意义的)
I want to be a/an __________
There are many kinds of jobs in the world, but different people have different ideas.
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4．在本单元的学习中，同学们已经探讨了部分因科技进步已经消失和即将逐渐消失的职业。然而，科技进步同样会催生众多新兴职业。现在，我们诚挚地邀请同学们放飞想象，构想一个你认为未来可能崭露头角的新职业，并描绘其特点与前景。期待你们的创意与见解。文章不少于50个词。
Suggested questions:
1. What new job do you think will appear in the future
2. What kind of job will it be
3. Why do you think so
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5．为提高同学们的英语口语水平，学校决定举行以“If I become a teacher”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请写一篇演讲稿参加此次比赛。
要求：
1. 80词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
4. 有卷面分。（1）书写正规 （2）卷面整洁
If I become a teacher
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. If I become a teacher,
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That’s all. Thank you!
6．假如你是李辉，是育英学校的英文报通讯员。为帮助学生提高人生规划能力，你校将举办一次“职业体验日 (Career Experience Day)”活动。现校英文报主编请你写一篇关于该活动的英文通知 (Notice)。
内容包括：
(1)活动时间和地点；
(2)活动内容；
(3)欢迎本校师生积极参加。
注意：
(1)词数80-100；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Notice
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Yu Ying Middle School
July, 2025
7．梦想，犹如一座灯塔，为人生航船指明方向。为了帮助同学们更好地探索这份宝贵的指引，找到属于自己的未来，学校英语广播站特举办“My Dream Job”征文比赛。请根据要点提示，完成征稿。
要点：1. What’s your dream job
2. Why do you want to be a...
3. How do you make your dream come true
要求：1.要点齐全，可适当拓展。
2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4.字数不少于80词 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)
My Dream Job
Everyone has his/her own dream. My dream job is
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8．假如你是李华，你的梦想是成为一名教师，请你根据以下提示，以“My Dream Job”为题，向校英文报投稿，谈一谈你的梦想职业。
提示：
1. What’s your dream job Why
2. What will you do to make it come true
3. How will you do this job well if it comes true
参考词汇：caring, patient, knowledge (知识), study hard, communicate, ...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone. My dream job is to
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9．你校英语角正在举办主题为“My dream job”的征稿活动，请你写一篇短文分享你的职业梦想。
提示：1. What is your dream job
2. Why do you want to be it
3. How can you make your dream come true
要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，内容积极向上，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80-100词。
Everyone has a dream job, and my dream job is to become a/an
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10．请根据下面信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的未来：
我将来要成为一个优秀的医生。我将在一所大医院工作。每天我都在帮助病人恢复健康 (help patients to return to health)，给他们提供治疗 (give treatment to)，给他们提供健康建议 (give... some advice on health)。我还会去老人院 (the Old Home) 为老人服务 (work for the old) …我喜欢我的工作，因为我是一个有责任心的人 (a person with responsibility)。
要求：
1. 内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 书写认真，句子通顺；
3. 词数：不少于65词 (开头已给出，但不计入总数)。
I will become a better doctor in the future.
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11．假设你是李辉，你的国外笔友David发来邮件想与你交流有关对未来职业的看法，请你根据以下提示，给David回一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）未来职业的重要性；
（2）选择未来职业的建议；
（3）你的期望。
写作要求：
（1）短文需包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥，逻辑清晰；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名、人名等信息；
（3）词数：60-80词；
（4）邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：
career ( 职业)，skill，subject (科目)，interest
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email.
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Yours,
Li Hui
12．假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter最近给你来信，希望你能分享对于未来职业的想法。请你给他回信，内容需包括：
1. 你的理想职业是什么；
2. 你选择该职业的理由（①兴趣爱好；②……）；
3. 你为实现职业目标的计划。
要求：
1. 词数为80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going I’m writing to share my dream job with you.
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What about your dream job I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．你校微信公众号英语专栏正开展以“我的职业规划”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你想从事的职业；
2.你选择该职业的理由（至少两点）；
3.你实现职业规划的措施（至少两条）。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息；
3.标题已给出，不计入总词数。
My Career Plan
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14．2025年贺岁电影《哪吒2》热播，哪吒精神“若前方无路，我便踏出一条路 (If there is no path ahead, I will create one! )”极大鼓舞了很多人。假如你是李雷，观看完这部影片后，感触颇深，立志好好学习，健康生活，完善自我，请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的理想和打算。
What do you think of the movie Ne Zha 2
What can you learn from it
What’s your dream in the future
How are you going to do that
要求：
1. 词数不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，书写认真规范；
2. 短文应包括表格内容，不要逐字翻译，语句通顺，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My Dream
I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me.
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15．树立远大理想，营造榜样氛围。近来学校开展征文活动。请以“When Dreams Meet Heroes”为题撰写一篇英文文章投稿。内容要求包含以下表格中的所有要点，参考词汇可按需选用：
What ● Your dream job
Why ● Important people around you/role models inspiring you ● Reasons you admire him/her
How ● Ways to realize your dream
注意：
1. 词数：70词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
参考词汇：scientist, doctor, engineer, teacher, smart, brave, hard-working, study hard, keep practicing, never give up
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.
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16．假设你是李华，你校正在开展以“职面未来”为主题的职业规划活动，现向学生征集未来想从事的职业等信息。请你根据以下调查问卷， 给活动负责人Mr Black写一封邮件，谈谈自己的未来职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。
Your Future Job1. What do you want to be in the future □A doctor □A teacher □Other ________ 2. Why do you choose that 3. What’s your plan for your future job
注意: （1）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息；
（2）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Black,
I’m Li Hua from Grade 8 and I’m writing to talk about my future job.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友George发来邮件想了解你未来想做什么职业。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 未来想从事的一种职业；
2. 选择该职业的2个原因；
3. 你的打算（至少2点）
注意：
1. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；
2. 字数100词左右。
Dear George,
Thanks for your e-mail.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．你们学校社团即将举办以“My Life in 2035”为题的英文演讲比赛。请你围绕下表所示的三个问题，写一篇英文演讲稿谈谈十年后你的生活。
My Life in 2035 Where will I live （a big city; a quiet village...）
What job will I have （I hope to...; I can...）
How will new technology help me （cars; robots...）
注意：
1. 根据上表所给提示，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Life in 2035
Hello everyone,
Let me share something about what my life in 2035 may be like with you.
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Thanks for listening!
19．树立远大理想，营造榜样氛围。近来学校开展征文活动。请以“When Dreams Meet Heroes”为题撰写一篇英文文章投稿。内容要求包含以下表格中的所有要点，参考词汇可按需选用：
What Your dream job
Why Important people around you / role models inspiring you Reasons you admire him / her
How Ways to realize your dream
注意：
1. 词数：70 词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
参考词汇：scientist, doctor, engineer, teacher, smart, brave, hard - working, study hard, keep practicing, never give up
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes.
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20．假如你是李华，学校英语校刊正在举办以“My Dream Job”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括：1. 你的梦想职业是什么；
2. 你为什么想从事这个职业；
3. 为了实现这个梦想，你打算怎么做。
注意：1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be interested in (对……感兴趣)，allow sb. to do sth. (允许某人做某事)，passion (n. 激情)
My Dream Job
Everyone has a dream job, and mine is to
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to recommend myself to be the reporter of your magazine.
I’m an outgoing and curious person. I love exploring new things and talking to different people, which makes me good at communicating and gathering information.
Among all colours, I like blue best. Blue reminds me of the sky and the sea, bringing a sense of calm and peace. It also represents wisdom, and I always hope to approach things with a wise mind.
I think I’m suitable for this position for several reasons. Firstly, my outgoing personality helps me interact with others easily, so I can conduct interviews and collect stories about colours effectively. Secondly, my love for blue and my interest in colours in general make me passionate about writing articles for the “colours” column. I’m eager to share the beauty and meanings of different colours with readers.
I really hope to have the chance to work for your magazine.
Yours sincerely,
Shirley
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封自荐信，围绕应聘杂志专栏小记者展开；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中性格、最喜欢的颜色及原因、适合该职位的原因的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出应聘的优势。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出应聘意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从性格、最喜欢的颜色及原因、适合职位的原因几方面，说明自身优势；
第三步，书写结语。表达期望，结束信件。
[亮点词汇]
①outgoing外向的
②curious好奇的
③communicate交流
④gather information收集信息
⑤passionate热情
[高分句型]
①I love exploring new things and talking to different people, which makes me good at communicating and gathering information. (which引导非限定性定语从句，说明性格带来的优势)
②Firstly, my outgoing personality helps me interact with others easily, so I can conduct interviews and collect stories about colours effectively. (firstly开启原因说明，so表结果，阐述性格优势)
2．例文
I want to be a lawyer
I have a dream. I want to be a lawyer. Never give up, and great things will happen. This motto always cheers me up.
I am drawn to being a lawyer because I want to help people get justice. It’s cool to use laws to protect the weak. Also, I love arguing and finding solutions to problems.
To make my dream come true, I’ll study hard, especially in subjects like politics and history. After class, I can read books about laws. Besides, I’ll try to take part in speech competitions to improve my speaking skills. I believe I can make it with hard work one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括梦想职业、座右铭、喜欢该职业的原因以及如何获得未来梦想职业，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I have a dream. I want to be...”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“梦想职业是什么、鼓励自己的座右铭、喜欢该职业的原因以及如何获得该职业”几个方面重点介绍自己对未来职业的憧憬；
第三步，书写结语。可总结自己的梦想，或表达实现梦想的决心等。
[亮点词汇]
①be drawn to被……吸引
②come true实现
③take part in参加
④make it成功
[高分句型]
I am drawn to being a lawyer because I want to help people get justice.（原因状语从句）
3．例文
I want to be a teacher
There are many kinds of jobs in the world, but different people have different ideas. When I grow up, I want to be a teacher. Teachers are very important because they help students learn new things. I want to teach English because I love reading and writing. And I also want to make friends with my students and play with them.
I know being a teacher is not easy, but I will work hard to achieve my dream. I will study hard and learn as much as I can. I believe I can make a difference in my students’ lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己的梦想职业，原因；
第三步，介绍自己打算如何做。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①When I grow up, I want to be a teacher.（时间状语从句）
②Teachers are very important because they help students learn new things.（原因状语从句）
4．For reference:
“A sustainable energy architect” might be a hot new job. These professionals will design systems that blend renewable energy sources like solar and wind with smart home technology. They’ll ensure buildings and houses are energy-efficient to reduce carbon footprints and save money for people. With the world focusing on climate change, this job could lead the way in green living solutions.
Or:
In the future, I think there will be a new job that might become very popular, and it’s called a genetic counsellor.
A genetic counsellor’s job is to help people understand their genetic information. When we do genetic tests, we get a lot of data about our bodies, but it’s often hard to understand. Genetic counsellors are experts who can help us understand these data.
For example, if you want to know if you or your family have a risk of getting a certain genetic disease, a genetic counsellor helps you understand those risks and tell you how to prevent or deal with them.
They also share a lot of knowledge about genes and how they affect our health. This way, you can make healthier lifestyle choices based on your genetic information.
I think this amazing job will help us understand our health better and protect ourselves and our families for the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，需构想未来可能的新职业并描绘其特点与前景；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已通过问题形式给出，考生需围绕未来新职业的名称、性质及存在原因展开想象，适当添加细节，突出职业的创新性与时代关联性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“科技进步催生新职业”的背景引出核心构想；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“职业名称、具体职责、存在必要性”三个维度描绘未来新职业的独特性；
第三步，书写结语。表达“期待该职业改善人类生活”的愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 许多
②for example例如
③deal with 处理
④focus on关注
[高分句型]
①With the world focusing on climate change, this job could lead the way in green living solutions. (with的复合结构作状语)
5．例文
If I become a teacher
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. If I become a teacher, I will make friends with my students. I will be friendly to them. If they are in trouble, I will try my best to help them. If I become a teacher, I will teach my students well and be always there to help them with their schoolwork. If I become a teacher, I will keep on studying and improving myself so that my students can get more from me.
Becoming a teacher is my dream. I believe my dream will come true.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般将来时；
③提示：写作开头已给出，考生可以结合自己的实际情况展开文章内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己成为一名老师后会如何与学生相处、帮助学生及如何自我提升；
第二步，表达期待，梦想成真；
第三步，结束语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with my students和我的学生交朋友
②in trouble处在麻烦之中
③keep on继续
[高分句型]
①If I become a teacher, I will keep on studying and improving myself so that my students can get more from me.（目的状语从句）
②I believe my dream will come true.（宾语从句）
6．例文：
Notice
Do you have any idea about your future career To help students improve their life planning skills, our school will hold a “Career Experience Day” activity.
The activity will take place on July 20th in the school hall and playground. During the day, different professionals like doctors, teachers and engineers will share their work experiences. There will also be interactive games to let you experience different jobs.
All teachers and students are welcome to take part in this meaningful activity. We believe the “Career Experience Day” will be interesting and helpful for you and we hope to see you there!
Yu Ying Middle School
July, 2025
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍活动的时间、地点和具体内容；
第三步，呼吁大家参与。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生、举行
②interactive games互动游戏
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
There will also be interactive games to let you experience different jobs. (there be句型)
7．例文
My Dream Job
Everyone has his/her own dream. My dream job is to be an animal doctor. Because I want to help them when they are sick or hurt. I think animals should be treated with kindness, just like people, and I want to spend my life taking care of them.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard in school, especially in science. I also help out at a local animal shelter on weekends to learn more. I read books and watch videos about animals and how to take care of them. I believe that by working hard, my dream will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍梦想的工作是什么；
第二步，介绍想当兽医的原因；
第三步，阐述自己如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of 照顾
②come true 实现
[高分句型]
①My dream job is to be an animal doctor. (动词不定式作表语)
②I believe that by working hard, my dream will come true. (that引导宾语从句)
8．例文：
My Dream Job Hello, everyone. My dream job is to be a teacher.
I want to be a teacher because teachers are really great. They are caring and patient. They share knowledge with students and help us grow.
To make my dream come true, I’ll study hard in all my subjects. I’ll also read more books to learn more knowledge. And I plan to communicate with my teachers often. I want to learn how to teach well from them.
If I become a teacher, I’ll be kind to my students. I’ll prepare interesting lessons. When students have problems, I’ll be patient to help them. I hope to be a good teacher and help my students have a bright future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍理想的工作是什么以及原因；
第二步，介绍如何实现理想；
第三步，如果能从事理想的工作，将会怎样做得很好。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be想要成为
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
③plan to do sth. 打算做某事
④help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①To make my dream come true, I’ll study hard in all my subjects. (动词不定式表目的)
②If I become a teacher, I’ll be kind to my students. (if引导的条件状语从句)
9．例文
My dream job
Everyone has a dream job, and my dream job is to become a teacher. I believe teaching is not only a job, but also a way to help others and make a difference in their lives.
Teachers play an important role in our lives. They teach us knowledge, help us solve problems, and encourage us to be better. I want to be a teacher because I hope to inspire students, just like my teachers inspire me.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard at school. I’ll learn more about different subjects and practice speaking clearly. Also, I’ll be kind and patient, ready to listen to students. I believe that with hard work, I can be a good teacher and help many students.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：围绕“我的理想工作”，从工作的意义、职业的作用、选择该工作的原因，到为实现梦想的行动规划来写。
【写作步骤】
第一步：开篇点明主旨，说明自己的梦想工作是什么；
第二步：阐述工作的意义以及该职业在生活中的重要作用；
第三步：讲述为实现梦想的行动，完善梦想实现的路径 。
【亮点词汇】
①make a difference 有影响
②not only... but also... 不仅……而且……
【高分句型】
①I believe teaching is not only a job, but also a way to help others and make a difference in their lives.（省略that引导的宾语从句 ）
②I want to be a teacher because I hope to inspire students, just like my teachers inspire me.（because引导的原因状语从句 ）
10．例文
I will become a better doctor in the future. I’ll work in a big hospital where I can help patients to return to health every day.
My job includes giving treatment to sick people and giving them some advice on health. Besides hospital work, I’ll also go to the Old Home to work for the old. I truly love my job because I’m a person with responsibility. Making others healthy makes me happy.
To achieve this dream, I’ll study medicine hard from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，介绍自己的工作地点；
第二步：介绍自己的工作内容以及想成为医生的原因；
第三步：介绍为了成为医生要做的努力。
[亮点词汇]
①sick people病人
②Besides hospital work除了医院工作
③makes me happy使我快乐
④achieve this dream实现这个梦想
⑤from now on从现在开始
[高分句型]
①I’ll work in a big hospital where I can help patients to return to health every day. (where引导的限制性定语从句)
②I truly love my job because I’m a person with responsibility. (because引导的原因状语从句)
11． Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email. Choosing a future career is very important because it affects our happiness and life goals. My advice is to consider your interests and skills. For example, if you love science, you might become a researcher. Also, think about which subjects you are good at. Personally, I hope to be a teacher because I enjoy helping others. I believe finding a career you love will bring success.
Yours, Li Hui
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：邮件（建议类）；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：需涵盖职业重要性、选择建议、个人期望三要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步：开篇回应邮件，点明职业选择的重要性（影响幸福感和人生目标）；
第二步：给出具体建议（兴趣+技能+擅长科目结合）并举例说明；
第三步：表达个人职业期望（教师）并总结核心观点。
【亮点词汇】
①for example例如
②be good at擅长
【高分句型】
①Choosing a future career is very important because it affects our happiness and life goals.（原因状语从句，动名词作主语）
②I believe finding a career you love will bring success.（宾语从句）
12．参考范文：
Dear Peter,
How’s everything going I’m writing to share my dream job with you. I dream of becoming an English teacher when I grow up and guide students to explore the wonderful world of language.
I am eager to be an English teacher because I have a deep love for English. Reading English books and watching English movies allow me to explore different cultures. In addition, my English teacher, Ms. Brown, has greatly influenced me. Her classes are always lively and interesting. I hope to be a teacher like her and inspire students to fall in love with English.
I have clear plans to reach my goal. First, I’ll work tirelessly to study English and improve my knowledge. Besides, I plan to join the English Club and practise speaking English every week.
What about your dream job I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：需包含理想职业、理由、计划等；语句通顺，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己的理想职业——英语老师；
第二步，阐述选择该职业的理由；
第三步，阐述为实现职业目标的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②be eager to渴望做某事
③allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
④fall in love with爱上
[高分句型]
①I am eager to be an English teacher because I have a deep love for English.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Reading English books and watching English movies allow me to explore different cultures. （动名词短语作主语）
13．例文：
My Career Plan
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. There are two main reasons for my choice. First, I love English and enjoy sharing knowledge with others. Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful.
To achieve my goal, I will work hard to improve my English skills by reading more English books. I also plan to practice public speaking to become a better communicator. With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要用一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：要根据题干内容写短文谈谈自己的职业规划，包含职业选择、两点理由和两条措施。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明职业选择并阐述两点理由；
第二步，提出两条措施并表达信心。
[亮点词汇]
①shape young minds 塑造年轻心灵
②public speaking 公开演讲
③communicator 交流者
④make one’s dream come true 实现某人的梦想
[高分句型]
①There are two main reasons for my choice. (There be句型)
②Second, teachers can help shape young minds, which is very meaningful. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
③With these efforts, I believe I can make my dream come true.(省略that的宾语从句)
14．例文
My Dream
I watched the exciting movie Ne Zha 2. Among all the things in it, the line “If there is no path ahead, I will create one!” deeply touched me. I like it very much because in the movie when Ne Zha faces difficulties, he always tries his best. He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. From the movie, I can learn that we should try our best to face any difficulties.
As for me, I want to be a doctor in the future. When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people.
To make my dream come true, I’m going to make three resolutions. Firstly, I’m going to study hard to get good grades so that I can go to a medical university. Secondly, I’m going to improve myself. For example, I will read more books on medicine in my free time to learn more about medicine. Finally, I’m going to play sports to keep healthy. It’s a good way to start an exercise program and eat less fast food.
I hope my dream can come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括四个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由电影《哪吒 2》中的台词及哪吒面对困难的态度，引出应尽力面对挑战的感悟；
第二步，表明自己未来想成为医生，帮助病人的梦想；
第三步，列出实现医生梦想的三个计划——努力学习、提升医学知识、保持健康；
第四步，表达对梦想成真的期盼。
[亮点词汇]
①come true 实现
②in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
[高分句型]
①He tries to save his parents even if they disagree. (even if引导的让步状语从句)
②When I become a doctor, I will try my best to help the sick people. (when引导的时间状语从句)
15．例文
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes. My dream is to become a scientist like Qian Xuesen.
Qian Xuesen is my role model. He gave up a good life abroad and returned to China. He worked tirelessly to make great contributions to our country’s aerospace science and technology. His love for his country and hard work inspired me.
To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties.
I hope I can make my dream come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕梦想与英雄展开，需突出对英雄的敬佩及为实现梦想的行动，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先点明梦想与英雄的联系，引出自己想成为像钱学森那样的科学家这一梦想。
第二步，再介绍钱学森的事迹及对自己的激励‘
第三步，阐述为实现梦想将采取的行动’
第四步，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be lit up by 被……照亮
②give up 放弃
③make great contributions to 为……做出巨大贡献
④tirelessly 不知疲倦地
⑤never give up 永不放弃
[高分句型]
①To realize my dream, I will not only study hard to enrich myself, but also never give up when facing difficulties. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②I hope I can make my dream come true one day. (省略that的宾语从句)
16．【参考范文】
Dear Mr Black,
I’m Li Hua from Grade 8 and I’m writing to talk about my future job. Encouraged by my mother, I dream of becoming a doctor like her one day. Though my mother is very busy, she always tries her best to look after patients. She often says she feels happy when she helps patients, which moves me a lot.
Here is my plan for the future job. First, to achieve my goal, I will make a great effort to win a place in a medical university. Besides, it’s important for me to gain lots of knowledge about medicine through reading books. What’s more, I decide to do some volunteer work in hospitals to improve my skills.
As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍自己未来的职业；
第二步，介绍如何实现这一理想；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①dream of梦寐以求
②look after照顾
③lots of许多
④decide to do sth决定做某事
⑤in the future未来
[高分句型]
①Though my mother is very busy, she always tries her best to look after patients.（Though引导让步状语从句）
②She often says she feels happy when she helps patients, which moves me a lot.（when引导时间状语从句）
③As long as I work hard, I believe I can become a good doctor in the future.（As long as引导条件状语从句）
17．例文
Dear George,
Thanks for your e-mail. I want to be an English teacher in the future. First, teaching lets me share knowledge and help kids open their eyes to the world. Second, I enjoy speaking English and feel happy when others learn from me.
To reach my dream, I will read English every day to enlarge my vocabulary and practise giving short lessons to my classmates. I also plan to join the school tutoring club next year to gain real teaching experience.
I believe hard work will lead me to the classroom I dream of. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的未来职业，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍未来想从事的一种职业；
第二步，介绍选择该职业的2个原因；
第三步，介绍你的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from从……学习
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③dream of梦想
[高分句型]
①I enjoy speaking English and feel happy when others learn from me. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I believe hard work will lead me to the classroom I dream of. (宾语从句，定语从句)
18．例文
My Life in 2035
Hello everyone,
Let me share something about what my life in 2035 may be like with you.
First, I will live in a big city. Shanghai sounds perfect! There’s so much to do and see. By then, I hope to be a clothes designer. It’s something I really enjoy and I’m good at it. Making pretty clothes for others makes me happy. And I think life will be super cool in 2035. Maybe we’ll have cars that can fly in the sky and robots that live with us. My everyday life will be full of surprises and fun.
I’m excited to see what will happen. I’ll keep working hard to make my dreams come true.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我的2035年的生活的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你围绕下表所示的三个问题，写一篇英文演讲稿谈谈十年后你的生活”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“将住在哪里、有什么工作、新技术如何帮助我的等”几个方面重点介绍我的2035年的生活的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“谢谢倾听”的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①hope to do sth希望做某事；
②be good at擅长；
③be full of充满；
④come true实现。
[高分句型]
①There’s so much to do and see. (“there be”句型)
②Making pretty clothes for others makes me happy. (动名词作主语)
19．例文
When Dreams Meet Heroes
Dreams are often lit up by the light of heroes. I want to be a teacher in the future.
My dream is inspired by my English teacher. She is very smart, kind and hard-working. I admire her because she always helps us patiently and makes learning fun. To realize my dream, I will study hard, especially in all subjects. I will also read more books to learn more knowledge. Most importantly, I will never give up and keep practicing my teaching skills.
I believe my dream will come true.
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，介绍你的梦想职业；
第二步，介绍你的榜样及原因；
第三步，实现梦想的具体做法。
【亮点词汇】①be inspired by被……激励
②patiently耐心地
③give up放弃
【高分句型】I admire her because she always helps us patiently and makes learning fun. （because引导的原因状语从句）
20．例文
My Dream Job
Everyone has a dream job, and mine is to become a software engineer. I have been interested in computers since childhood, and I am fascinated by how technology can solve real-world problems.
I want to pursue this career because it allows me to be creative and innovative. I enjoy coding and designing programs, and I hope to develop useful applications that can improve people’s lives.
To achieve my dream, I plan to study computer science in university and practice coding regularly. I will also participate in tech competitions to gain experience. With hard work and passion, I believe I can succeed in this field.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我梦想的工作”的话题，并介绍未来想从事的职业；
第二步，具体阐述选择该职业的原因；
第三步，描述为实现梦想要做的努力。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
②achieve one’s dream实现某人的梦想
③participate in参加
④succeed in sth在某方面成功
[高分句型]
①I want to pursue this career because it allows me to be creative and innovative. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I enjoy coding and designing programs, and I hope to develop useful applications that can improve people’s lives. (that引导的定语从句)
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