Unit 6 单元写作--2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重点题型精准练 沪教牛津版（深圳 广州）
1．模仿P92范文，根据以下模板以“最适合饲养的动物”为题，写一篇小短文。
________ make the best pets
I think that ________ make the best pets.
Firstly, ________. We can ________. It’s ________ to ________.
Secondly, ________. They can/help ________.
Thirdly, we can also learn ________. What’s more, ________. If we keep them as pets, we may be able to ________.
In my opinion, it is the best idea to keep ________ as pets.
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2．现在越来越多的人喜欢养宠物，然而每个人对于养宠物的看法不一。假设你是Esther，最近你们班展开了一次以“Should People Keep Pets ”为主题的班会，以下是你班里同学的观点，请你写一写并谈谈自己的观点。
赞成 宠物非常可爱，它们可以带给人们快乐； 宠物可以陪伴独居老人 (elderly people living alone)，使他们感到充 实而快乐 (full and happy)； ……
不赞成 花费大量时间精力 (time and energy)； ……
你的观点 ……
要求：包含要点信息，可适当发挥，70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should People Keep Pets
Different people have different opinions on keeping pets.
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3．现在，越来越多的人养宠物，或者经常听朋友讲宠物。假设你是学生李辉，请根据以下提示，写一篇有关宠物的短文，要点如下：
1.描述一种宠物
2.养此宠物的优点
3.你对宠物的感情
注意：
1.词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Now more and more people like to keep pets.
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4．假如你是李华，你的生日即将到来，你想向爸爸要一只小狗作为生日礼物，但爸爸担心你不能照顾好它或者它会影响你的学习。请根据以下提示，用英语给爸爸写一封信，谈谈你的想法。
提示：
(1) Why would you like to have a dog
(2) What will you do if you can get a dog
注意：
(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数70个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear dad,
I would like to have a dog as my birthday present.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华，你们学校英语俱乐部将要举行主题为“My Pet”的交流分享会。请你根据以下表格提示，以“My Pet Dog”为题用英文写一篇短文，向同学们介绍你的宠物狗。
Name Tony
Age 3 months old
Color yellow and white
Personality friendly
Favourite food apples
Activities 1. playing with the ball; 2. … 3. …
要求:
1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
My Pet Dog
Today, I will introduce my lovely pet dog to you
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6．现在越来越多的人热衷于养宠物，然而每个人对养宠物的看法不一。假设你是李梅，最近你们班里展开了一次以“Should people keep pets ”为主题的班会，请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的短文发表你自己的看法。
提示：
1. 宠物可以带给孩子们快乐；他们可以饲养一些小巧可爱的宠物；
2. 宠物可以使独居的老年人感到忙碌和充实；
3. 养宠物可以使人们展示自己的爱心。
Should people keep pets
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7．假设你是Jenny，请你以“My pet dog”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
提示：（1）父母送的生日礼物。（2）通体雪白，非常可爱。（3）每天晚饭后带它散步，放学后陪它玩耍。
注意：（1）短文须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；（3）词数70词左右。
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8．假如你们班就“是否应该养宠物”展开了辩论，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，阐述自己的观点。
1. 宠物非常可爱，给我们带来快乐；
2. 培养我们的责任心；
3. 使我们学会照顾他人。
要求：80词左右。
Our class has a debate on keeping pets recently.
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9．随着生活水平的提高，人们开始重视自己的生活质量。越来越多的人开始热衷于养宠物。可爱的小动物给人们带来了无穷的快乐，然而，对于那些不喜欢动物的人来说，宠物的存在会给他们的生活增添很多烦恼。请结合此话题，写一篇英语作文，谈谈你的看法：人们该不该养宠物，为什么？
观点1 养宠物 理由1：宠物可以让我们放松心情 理由2：对于老人来说，养宠物可以减轻寂寞感 理由3：……（自己增加一到两个理由）
观点2 不养宠物 理由1：养宠物需要我们花很多时间去照顾它们 理由2：宠物容易滋生细菌，带来疾病 理由3：……（自己增加一到两个理由）
总结你的观点（支持？/反对？）并写出至少一个原因。 1. …… 2. ……
注意：
1. 请选择其中一个观点来写作，文章的开头已为你写好；
2. 词数80左右。
参考词汇：
滋生细菌：breed bacteria 热衷于：be fond of
减轻寂寞感：feel less lonely 保卫房屋：keep house safe
在我看来：in my opinion
Nowadays, more and more people are fond of keeping pets because they can bring pleasure. But others don’t think so. They think it’s terrible to do it. In my opinion, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你是李林，你校开办了宠物俱乐部(Pet Club)并正在招募会员，你想加入该俱乐部。请你用英文写一封申请信给俱乐部的外籍负责人Miss White。申请信需包括以下要点：
1. 原因：想问其他会员分享养宠物的经验；想为自己的宠物找朋友；喜欢俱乐部的活动。
2. 贡献：(请补充)
注意： (1)参考词汇：活动 activity
(2)词数：80词左右(信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)；
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Miss White，
I’m Li Lin. I would like to join the Pet Club in our school.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Lin
11．现在许多人拥有自己的宠物，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文来谈一谈养宠物的好处。可适当发挥。70词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
提示：1. 养宠物可以减少孤独感。
2. 拥有动物的人更容易结识新朋友。
3. 养宠物的孩子更善于分享(share)并且懂得照顾他人。
4. 小动物可成为家庭成员间讨论的话题，可改善家庭成员之间的关系。
Now many people have one or two animals as pets.
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12．什么宠物是你心中最好的宠物？请你根据下面的要点提示，以“________ make the best pets”为题写一篇英语短文。
要点提示：
1. 要有三点以上的理由来支撑
2. 要言之有理
要求：
1. 须包含提示中的所有要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数： 80左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：accompany 陪伴，regular checkup 定期检查
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13．假如你是李华，你的朋友珍妮想了解一下你的宠物狗。现在请你发一封70词左右的电子邮件，向她介绍宠物狗的外貌以及你和宠物狗相处的情况，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to tell you something about my pet dog.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．假定你是七年级学生李华，读到有关Zora和他宠物之间故事的博客文章后，想给他写一封信讲述你和宠物之间的一件趣事。内容包括：
（1）简单介绍你的宠物；
（2）讲述你和宠物之间的趣事；
（3）你的感受。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，短文的开头和结尾已给出；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Zora,
After reading your blog about your first pet, I felt happy about you and your pet. Now let me tell you a story about me and my pet.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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《Unit 6 单元写作--2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重点题型精准练 沪教牛津版（深圳 广州）》参考答案
1．例文：
Dogs make the best pets
I think that dogs make the best pets.
Firstly, dogs are lovely. We can play with them. It’s convenient and easy for us to feed dogs and take care of them. Secondly, dogs can bring their masters happiness and joy. They can help masters take something they want with their mouths. Thirdly, we can also learn to take care of others. What’s more, no matter how poor the owner is, his dog will never abandon them. If we keep them as pets, we may be able to be happy every day.
In my opinion, it is the best idea to keep dogs as pets.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据模板以“最适合饲养的动物”为题，写一篇小短文，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“最适合饲养的动物”的话题；
第二步，描述适合的饲养的原因以及依据；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②abandon放弃
③be able to能够
[高分句型]
①It’s convenient and easy for us to feed dogs and take care of them. (it作形式主语)
② If we keep them as pets, we may be able to be happy every day. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2．例文
Should People Keep Pets
Different people have different opinions on keeping pets. Some think it’s good to keep them. Because pets can make them happy. They can always be with elderly people living alone, make them living a full and happy life. But others think keeping pets need more time and energy. They don’t think it’s good.
In my opinion, keeping pets is good. Because keeping pets can make people become more and more responsible, and people can learn how to look after others. Also, pets can help us do some useful things and bring us joy and happiness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示和表格的内容说明同学们的观点。
第二步，发表自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion 在我看来
②more and more responsible 越来越有责任感
③look after 照顾
[高分句型]
①They don’t think it’s good.（宾语从句）
②Also, pets can help us do some useful things and bring us joy and happiness.（and连接并列成分）
3． Now more and more people like to keep pets. My favorite pet is a dog. Dogs are loyal and friendly. They can make good partner.
Keeping a dog has many advantages. Dogs can protect our homes and help us feel safe. They also help us to stay active by going for walks.
I have a deep affection for dogs. My dog, Max, brings me joy and happiness every day. I enjoy playing with him and taking care of him. Pets can bring a lot of love and fun into our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求以李辉的身份，根据提出的三个要点写一篇有关宠物的短文，为了使行文连贯，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述一种宠物：选择一种宠物（在这个案例中是狗），并描述它的特点和外观；
第二步，养此宠物的优点：列出养这种宠物的好处，比如狗可以保护家园、提供陪伴等；
第三步，你对宠物的感情：分享你个人对宠物的感受，以及宠物给你的生活带来的积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①have a deep affection for...对……有深厚的感情
②take care of照顾
③enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①Keeping a dog has many advantages.(动名词作主语)
②They also help us to stay active by going for walks.(by引导的方式状语)
4．参考范文：
Dear dad,
I would like to have a dog as my birthday present. As we all know, animals are human’s good friends, especially dogs. They are friendly and loyal. They can also bring us lots of fun. If I can get a dog, I will treat it like my best friend. I will feed it every day. When I finish my homework, I will take it out for a walk. We can run in the park. It’s also good exercise for me. Don’t worry about my schoolwork, I can take care of both of them.
I’m really looking forward to having a dog.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍为什么想养狗以及会做什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know 众所周知
②take it out for a walk 带它出去散步
③worry about 担心
④look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①When I finish my homework, I will take it out for a walk.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If I can get a dog, I will treat it like my best friend.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．例文
My Pet Dog
Today, I will introduce my lovely pet dog to you. His name is Tony. He’s yellow and white. He is only three months old, and he is cute. He likes playing with me and he also likes playing with the ball. After school, I often go for a walk with him in the park. He is friendly to people and all of my friends like him. Oh! His favourite food is apples. I really have a great time with him and I believe he will be my best friend forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图：介绍自己的宠物狗；
第二步，具体阐述宠物狗的相关信息；
第三步，书写结语，表达情感。
[亮点词汇]
①play with sb和某人一起玩
②have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
I really have a great time with him and I believe he will be my best friend forever. (并列句；宾语从句)
6．例文
Should people keep pets
Many people have different opinions on keeping pets. I think it’s good to keep pets.
First, pets can bring children joy and happiness. Some animals are small and cute. Children can keep them easily. So for children, it’s good to keep such animals as pets. Second, more and more old people live by themselves. They often feel lonely and can talk with nobody. Keeping pets can make them busy and feel less lonely. When they take their pets for a walk, they can also exercise themselves. Third, keeping pets can make people show their love.
In a word, keeping pets is helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，关于养宠物提出自己的看法；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：提示给出了三点关于养宠物的优点，注意要加上自己的观点；同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作背景，陈述自己的观点；
第二步，分三点详细阐述养宠物的优点；
第三步，做出总结归纳，复述观点。
[亮点词汇]
① have different opinions on sth.在某事上持有不同的看法
② be good to对……好
③ more and more越来越多
④ be helpful to对……有帮助
⑤ in a word总之
[高分句型]
① I think it’s good to keep pets.（省略that的宾语从句；it作形式主语）
② Keeping pets can make them busy and feel less lonely. （动名词作主语；make+宾语+宾补）
7．例文：
My Pet Dog
My name is Jenny. I love animals very much so my parents bought me a pet dog for my birthday last year. It is all white like snow. It has two big and bright eyes. It is very friendly and lovely. I like playing with it after school and take it for a walk after dinner every day. It is my good friend and I love it very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍自己的宠物狗。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己的宠物狗；
第二步，具体介绍宠物狗的外貌等；
第三步，介绍自己与宠物狗之间的互动并表达对它的喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①very much 非常
②take ... for a walk 带……去散步
③every day 每天
[高分句型]
①My name is Jenny. I love animals very much so my parents bought me a pet dog for my birthday last year.（so连接表因果关系的并列句）
②It is my good friend and I love it very much.（and连接表等同关系的并列句）
8．例文
Our class has a debate on keeping pets recently.
75% of the students in our class think it is a good idea to keep pets. Firstly, the pets are very cute and bring them a lot of happiness. Secondly, keeping pets can help them learn responsibility. Thirdly, people can learn how to care for others by feeding them and taking care of them. However, the rest are against the idea. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets, it will do harm to the environment. Besides, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.
I like animals, so I don’t think it’s bad to keep pets. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment and harming people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“是否应该养宠物”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍养宠物的好处；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①care for照顾，关心
②take care of照顾
③be bad to对……不好
[高分句型]
①In their opinion, if too many people keep pets, it will do harm to the environment.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment and harming people.（动名词作宾语）
9．例文
Nowadays, more and more people are fond of keeping pets because they can bring pleasure. But others don’t think so. They think it’s terrible to do it. In my opinion, keeping pets will do good to our family and ourselves. First, it’s relaxing to have a pet accompanied us because it is cute and smart. For example, a dog may understand you well when you are upset or tired. We can talk about our problems with the pets and never worry about letting out. Second, for the old, keeping a pet means living a family with them, so they will feel less lonely. What’s more, when there is a fire or something bad happened, the pet may warn the keeper about the danger. In this way, many people are saved by their pets.
All in all, try keeping a pet in your family and I am sure you will get a lot from it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“选择其中一个观点来写作”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，表明你对于养宠物的是持支持还是反对的看法；
第二步，根据所选择的观点，按照提示的内容进行阐述，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，再次表明自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①do good to对……有好处
②let out泄露
③warn sb about sth提醒某人某事
[高分句型]
①First, it’s relaxing to have a pet accompanied us because it is cute and smart.（because引导原因状语从句，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
②For example, a dog may understand you well when you are upset or tired.（when引导时间状语从句）
③Second, for the old, keeping a pet means living a family with them, so they will feel less lonely.（so连接表示因果关系的并列分句）
10．范文
Dear Miss White,
I’m Li Lin. I would like to join the Pet Club in our school. I want to be a part of the club because I want to share some experience of keeping pets with other pet owners. I keep a pet dog at home now, so I have a lot to share. What’s more, I also want to find some friends for my pet dog in the club. Last but not least, I think the activities in the club are interesting and I like them very much.
If I join the Pet Club, I will do something for the club, such as playing games with the pets, keeping them clean and taking good care of them.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点包括想要加入宠物俱乐部的原因，以及加入该俱乐部后所能做的贡献。想要加入宠物俱乐部的具体原因题目已给出提示，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，另外需补充加入俱乐部后能为俱乐部带来哪些贡献的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先自我介绍，表明写作意图：想要加入宠物俱乐部；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己想要加入俱乐部的原因，及贡献；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望收到对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某物
②experience 经验
③what’s more 而且
④last but not least 最后
⑤take good care of 好好照顾
⑥look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
I want to be a part of the club because I want to share some experience of keeping pets with other pet owners.（because引导的原因状语从句）
If I join the Pet Club, I will do something for the club, such as playing games with the pets, keeping them clean and taking good care of them.（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文
Now many people have one or two animals as pets. Keeping a pet can make us feel less lonely. And if you have a pet, you’ll make friends more easily. Children who have pets are better at sharing and looking after others. And family members can talk about their pets together. This will improve the relationship between the family members.
In a word, it’s fun having a pet. Do you want one
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要点提示已经给出；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“很多人都养一两个宠物”引出下文，展开对养宠物好处的介绍；
第二步，按照要点提示，阐述养宠物的好处，注意适当发挥，使得句型结构不单一，同时注意表达的逻辑；
第三步，结尾总结，表示养宠物很有趣。
[亮点词汇]
①make us feel less lonely让我们不那么孤独
②make friends交朋友
③be better at更擅长于
④talk about谈论
[高分句型]
①Keeping a pet can make us feel less lonely. （动名词短语作主语）
②Children who have pets are better at sharing and looking after others. （who引导的定语从句）
12．例文：
Dogs make the best pets
I think that dogs make the best pets. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, it is convenient and easy for us to feed dogs and take care of them. Second, dogs can bring their masters happiness and joy. Third, dogs are so loyal that they are always patient to wait for their masters to come home at door. Dogs always accompany us faithfully. Last but not least, dogs can help masters take something they want with their mouths.
In conclusion, I choose dogs as the best pets in the world. Our life becomes interesting because of them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明(狗)是自己心中最好的宠物；
第二步，具体阐述三点原因来说明(狗)是自己心中最好的宠物；
第三步，最后作出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①as follows如下
②take care of照顾
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①To begin with, it is convenient and easy for us to feed dogs and take care of them.(it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语)
②Third, dogs are so loyal that they are always patient to wait for their masters to come home at door.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)
13．例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to tell you something about my pet dog. His name is Peter. He is my favourite animal. His fur is black. He has a small body and two big eyes. He likes to eat meat. He likes bones as well.
Every day when I get home from school, he always “greets” me with his waving tail and I play with him for some time. I keep him as my friend. As time goes by, he grows big and strong. He is so lovely and loyal that we all like him.
Do you consider having a pet dog Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题干中没有给出明确的写作要点，考生在写作时可从两方面入手，一是宠物狗的外貌，二是与宠物狗的相处情况；注意逻辑清晰、行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍宠物狗的外貌；
第二步，介绍与宠物狗的相处情况；
第三步，书写结语，询问对方宠物狗的情况，并期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
① as well 也
② play with sb. 与某人一起玩
③ look forward to 期盼
[高分句型]
He is so lovely and loyal that we all like him.（so ... that引导的结果状语从句）
14．例文：
Dear Zora,
After reading your blog about your first pet, I felt happy about you and your pet. Now let me tell you a story about me and my pet.
I have a pet dog. His name is Bobby. My grandma gave him to me as my birthday present last year. Bobby is very cute. He is black and white with two big eyes. He is a little strong and can run very fast. He likes playing with balls and chasing after other dogs when they are in the garden.
I often take good care of him. He likes bones and I feed him bones once a day. I also take him for a walk in our community when I am free. My father and I also make a beautiful bed for him.
Bobby is a member of our family. He brings us a lot of happiness and we all like him very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封英文信件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示内容”中关于作者的感受，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。所给开头已点名主题；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“作者宠物的姓名、宠物来自于奶奶、宠物的外貌及作者和宠物之间的故事等”几个方面重点介绍作者的宠物及作者和宠物之间的故事；
第三步，书写结语。表达“作者对宠物的感受”。
[亮点词汇]
① give sth to sb 把某物给某人
② a little strong 有点壮
③ take good care of 好好照看
④ take him for a walk 带他散步
⑤ bring sb sth 带给某人某物
[高分句型]
① He likes playing with balls and chasing after other dogs when they are in the garden.（句子为含有when引导的时间状语从句的复合句）
② He likes bones and I feed him bones once a day.（and连接并列复合句）
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