Unit 8 单元写作--2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重点题型精准练 沪教牛津版（深圳 广州）
1．在过去十年间，南宁发生了巨大的变化。假设南宁政府网英文版开展以“南宁观察”为话题的征文活动，介绍南宁的现状，请你根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的英文稿参加活动。
居住方面 住房更宽敞……
出行方面 方式更多样……
教育方面 学校更多、更现代化……
你的愿景 ……
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现题目要点以外的人名、校名、地名，否则不予评分；
4. 词数80左右（短文首尾句已给出，不记入总词数）。
In the past ten years, huge changes have taken place in Nanning.
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2．随着科学的进步，社会的发展，未来的生活将会变成什么样子呢？请以“The life in the future”为题写一篇文章，按下列提示完成。
1. 想象一下未来生活会是什么样子；
2. 具体介绍一下未来的生活：很多事情都由电脑和机器人完成。例如：料理家务、购物、看病，孩子们通过网络把课堂搬到家里，人们可以活到200岁等；
3. 为了未来美好的的生活，我们现在应该怎么做？80词左右。
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3．我们的家乡德州，历史悠久，人杰地灵，是山东省著名的文化古城，更是一座充满活力、宜居宜业的生态文明之城，有着众多的旅游景点和美食文化。作为一名中学生，请你为德州代言，向来自世界各地的游客做推介。
要求:
1.包含思维导图中所有信息点，并做适当拓展，使行文连贯;
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范;
3.不得使用真实姓名和校名;
Location Northwest
Population 5.53 million
Weather The best time to visit…
Transportation The best way to travel…
Famous people Famous food Famous sights Dong Fangshuo；Dong Zhongshu Dezhou chicken Dongzi Cultural Street；China’s Sun Valley
Way of life Chopsticks; shake hands
Changes Streets; building
Welcome to my hometown—Dezhou
Hello, everyone! Welcome to my hometown—Dezhou. Let me introduce the beautiful city to you.
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4．假设你是陈露，你收到美国好友 Lily的一封信，想了解你对未来学生生活的预测。请认真阅读下面的来信，根据信中内容给她回一封80词左右的信。请注意书写工整，不出现真实个人信息。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chen Lu, How is everything going I’m wondering what students’ life will be like in 50 years. How will they get to school Or will they just study at home. When will they get up and what subjects will they learn What will they do after school There are so many things about future to think about. I really want to know your ideas about students’ life in 50 years. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Lily
Dear Lily,
It’s great to hear from you and I’m doing well.
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Yours,
Chen Lu
5．北京是我国的首都，也是一个国际化大都市，请根据所学，写一篇介绍北京的作文。注意包括以下要点。
1. 北京是中国的首都，亚洲最具活力的城市之一；
2. 主要旅游景点（The Palace Museum;The Summer Palace; The Great Wall)；
3. 交通方式；
4. 特色小吃。
主要词汇和句型。
capital; one of the liveliest cities; fantastic sighs; including; it is convenient to do; taste delicious food.
要求：
1. 书写工整，卷面整洁；
2. 80词左右，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
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6．假期就要到了，你的朋友John 要来你所在的城市（青岛）旅游度假，他向你（Zhang Ming）了解青岛一年四季的气候情况和人们在夏天所进行的体育活动。请你为他写一封信作简要的介绍，内容包括：
1.青岛位于中国东部，在美丽的海边，这里春天暖和多风，夏天不太热，经常下雨，秋天凉爽，冬天较冷，最低气温在零下4度。
2.夏天是去游泳和划船的最好时间。这里的沙滩很好，适合打沙滩排球（beach volleyball）。
要求：100 词左右。
Dear John,
I’m happy you’ll travel to my city. Now let me tell you something about Qingdao.
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Yours,
Zhang Ming
7．徐州是国家历史文化名城，越来越多的人选择到徐州旅行。假定你是李华，想邀请在南京的笔友留学生David在五一假期到徐州游玩，请你根据以下要点，写一封邀请信。
1. 邀请他在五一假期来徐州旅游，
2. 推荐的旅游景点及理由，
3. 推荐的娱乐活动及理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 信需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；
3. 信中不得泄露个人信息。
参考词汇：五一劳动节：May Day
Dear David,
How are you I know you are interested in travelling.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．当今世界发展日新月异，科学技术正在不断改变着我们的生活。请根据以下提示发挥你的想象，以“My future life”为主题，写一篇英语短文。
(提示词：无人驾驶汽车 driverless car)
注意：
(1) 词数80个左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2) 内容应包括所有要点；
(3) 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My future life
With the development of science and technology, our lives are changing.
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9．假如北京是你最喜欢的城市之一，你去过很多次。请介绍一下你游览北京的经历，内容如下：
1．北京在中国的北方，每年有大量游客到北京旅游；
2．去过北京多次，游览了很多名胜古迹(places of interest)；
3．爬过长城，到过颐和园(the Summer Palace)和故宫(the Palace Museum)，拍下了很多照片；
4．上次去的时候，遇到几个有趣的外国人，用英语交谈甚欢。
要求：
1．词数80左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
3．包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
My experiences of visiting Beijing
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10．一系列的“新”已成为大家关注的热词，学校教育也将翻开新的篇章。未来的教室会是什么样呢？请你以“My Dream Classroom”为题，根据思维导图提示写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你理想的教室。
My Dream Classroom What will it look like What will make it “new”
How will the students study
What do you think of the dream classroom
注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80字左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人真实信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
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11．你的美国朋友Lucy计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在微信中给她留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡山西，词数70左右。
要求：1. 需包含所有提示信息（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
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I’m looking forward to meeting you!
12．凤凰涅槃，历史文化名城，美丽的唐山吸引着世界越来越多人的目光。为此，唐山文旅局向中学生开展“了解家乡事，厚植家乡情，爱我大唐山”的英语征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，以“Beautiful Tangshan”为题，描述唐山印象。
Beautiful Tangshan
Location east of Hebei province
History over 17,000 years
Population about 7.8 million
Places to visit South Park: live-action (实景) performance, wonderful Tangshan Museum: a museum of research, education and culture, large, meaningful ...
Things to eat chess-shaped shaobing ...
People …
要求：
(1)需包含要点提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)词数70个左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Beautiful Tangshan
Tangshan is in the east of Hebei province.
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13．厦门是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的风景、建筑、美食、非遗传承等，都有文化的印记。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于厦门文化的系列推送，现就“Cultural Symbols of Xiamen (厦门文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号写一篇文章，推荐一个你眼中的厦门文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由，词数在80—100词左右。
要求：
1. 短文需包含上述要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The Cultural Symbol of Xiamen in My Eyes
I’m glad to know that we’re planning to introduce Xiamen through WeChat official accounts. I’d like to tell you the cultural symbol of Xiamen in my eyes.
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14．近期全国各地的文旅局长开始“花式内卷”, 用各种形式为家乡代言，为文旅产业助力。假设你所在的学校也在积极行动，号召同学们用英文向中外友人介绍、宣传自己的家乡。请你根据以下思维导图，以 “Welcome to my hometown-Bayan Nur” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的家乡。
注意:
（1）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（2）词数80词左右；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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15．请以“A Place I Have Been to”为题写一篇短文，从地理位置、人口、天气、旅游景点、当地的食物等，介绍你曾经去过的某个地方。要求紧扣主题，语言表达准确，语意要通顺、连贯，词数约80。
A Place I Have Been to__________
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《Unit 8 单元写作--2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重点题型精准练 沪教牛津版（深圳 广州）》参考答案
1．例文
In the past ten years, huge changes have taken place in Nanning.
Firstly, people now live in more spacious apartments with greener communities, making life more comfortable. Secondly, transportation has become more diverse. The subway lines have been extended, and shared bikes are widely used, reducing traffic jams. Thirdly, education has improved greatly. More modern schools with advanced facilities like computer labs help students learn better.
In the future, I hope that Nanning will continue to develop and become an even greener and more livable city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题；
第二步，从居住、出行及教育三方面具体阐述南宁的变化；
第三步，书写结语。表达对未来的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②live in居住
③in the future在未来
④livable city宜居城市
[高分句型]
①I hope that Nanning will continue to develop and become an even greener and more livable city. (that引导的宾语从句)
2．例文
The life in the future
In the future, life will be very different from what it is today. With the development of science and society, many things will change for the better.
Imagine a world where computers and robots do most of the work. They will take care of our houses, do the shopping, and even help us see doctors. Children won’t need to go to school. They can study at home through the Internet. What’s more, because of medical advances, people may live to be 200 years old!
To enjoy such a wonderful life in the future, we need to work hard now. We should study science and technology to make these dreams come true. At the same time, we must learn to use technology wisely and protect our environment. Only in this way can we ensure a bright future for ourselves and generations to come.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章需围绕三个核心点展开：对未来生活的想象、具体描述未来生活场景、以及当前为实现未来美好生活应采取的行动。考生应确保覆盖所有提示要点，同时保持逻辑清晰，内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇即提出主题，以此引出对未来生活的探讨。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先，概述未来生活的总体想象；接着，详细介绍未来的生活场景；
第三步，书写结语。强调当前行动的重要性，提出对未来美好生活的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②for the better向更好的方向发展
③take care of照顾
④medical advances医学进步
[高分句型]
Imagine a world where computers and robots do most of the work. (定语从句)
3．例文：
Welcome to my hometown—Dezhou
Hello, everyone! Welcome to my hometown—Dezhou. Let me introduce the beautiful city to you.
Dezhou is located in the northwest of Shandong Province. It has a population of 5.53 million. The best time to visit Dezhou is in autumn, when the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. The best way to travel around the city is by bus or bike, which is convenient and environmentally friendly. There are many well-known people in Dezhou’s history, such as Dong Fangshuo and Dong Zhongshu. Dezhou is also famous for its delicious food, Dezhou chicken, which is a must-try for every visitor. As for the famous sights, Dongzi Cultural Street and China’s Sun Valley are great places to experience the local culture and modern technology. In daily life, we use chopsticks to eat and shake hands when we meet. In recent years, Dezhou has changed a lot. The streets are wider and cleaner, and more high-rise buildings have been built.
I’m sure you will have a great time here. Welcome to Dezhou!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题——介绍家乡德州；
第二步，介绍德州的地理位置，人口，著名人物，变化，最适合游玩的季节等信息；
第三步，最后欢迎大家来德州。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②in daily life在日常生活中
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①The best way to travel around the city is by bus or bike, which is convenient and environmentally friendly. (which引导的定语从句)
②There are many well-known people in Dezhou’s history, such as Dong Fangshuo and Dong Zhongshu. (there be句型)
4．例文
Dear Lily,
It’s great to hear from you and I’m doing well. I believe that students’ life in 50 years will be quite different from what it is now. They might go to school by using flying cars or perhaps study at home through virtual classrooms. I imagine they will start their day later, maybe around 9 a.m., and have a curriculum that includes subjects like robotics, space exploration, and environmental science. After school, students might take part in activities such as virtual reality sports or online club meetings. The future holds so many exciting possibilities!
Yours,
Chen Lu
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容预测未来学生的生活，包括上学方式、起床时间、学习科目、放学后活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达回复信件；
第二步，预测未来学生的上学方式、起床时间、学习科目、课后活动等。
[亮点词汇]
①virtual classrooms 虚拟教室
②curriculum 课程
③virtual reality sports 虚拟现实运动
[高分句型]
①I believe that students’ life in 50 years will be quite different from what it is now.（宾语从句）
②I imagine they will start their day later, maybe around 9 a.m., and have a curriculum that includes subjects like robotics, space exploration, and environmental science.（宾语从句，定语从句）
5．例文
Beijing is the capital of China and one of the liveliest cities in Asia. There are many fantastic sights in Beijing, including the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. The Palace Museum provided insights into Chinese history and culture, while the Summer Palace impressed us with its beautiful gardens and lakes. Climbing the Great Wall is challenging but rewarding, offering breathtaking views. It is convenient to travel in Beijing by bus, taxi or subway. You can also taste a variety of delicious foods in Beijing, such as Beijing Roast Duck and dumplings.
Welcome everyone to Beijing!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍北京；
第二步，具体阐述北京的主要旅游景点，交通和特色小吃；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of...……之一
②impress sb with sth有某物给某人留下印象
③a variety of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many fantastic sights in Beijing, including the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. (there be句型)
②Beijing is the capital of China and one of the liveliest cities in Asia. (形容词最高级)
6．例文：
Dear John,
I’m happy you’ll travel to my city. Now let me tell you something about Qingdao.
Qingdao is in the east of China and it’s near the beautiful sea. It’s warm and windy in spring. In summer, it’s not too hot and it rains a lot. The weather is cool in autumn, and it’s quite cold in winter with the lowest temperature reaching -4℃. Summer is the best time for swimming and boating. The beach here is excellent for playing beach volleyball.
I hope you have a great time in Qingdao.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点，注意语法正确，句子通顺，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，信件开头表达对朋友来访的欢迎，并表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍青岛的地理位置和四季气候特点，及衔接适合的体育活动；
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①in the east of 在……的东部
②have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I hope you have a great time in Qingdao. （宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear David,
How are you I know you are interested in travelling. I’d like to invite you to travel to Xuzhou during May Day holiday. Xuzhou is a famous city with a long history. There are many places of interest, such as Yunlong Mountain, Yunlong Lake and Han Tomb. You can learn a lot about the history and culture of Xuzhou. Besides, you can also enjoy some local food, like Guotie and Babao Porridge.
In the evening, you can go to the theater to watch Xuzhou Bangzi, a local opera. It’s very interesting. I’m sure you will have a great time in Xuzhou.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：在写作时要包含提示的要点。在阐述这些要点时注意保证条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出邀请。
第二步，介绍推荐的旅游景点并说明理由
第三步，介绍推荐的娱乐活动并说明理由。
[亮点词汇]
①during May Day holiday五一假期期间
②invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人去做某事
③places of interest名胜
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest, such as Yunlong Mountain, Yunlong Lake and Han Tomb.（there be句型）
② I’m sure you will have a great time in Xuzhou.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文：
My future life With the development of science and technology, our lives are changing.
Robots will help us do housework. In this way, we will have enough time to travel or do other things that we like. We can work and study at home. Getting into space will be very easy. We can often go to the moon for our holidays. We will have a lot of fresh water resources because solar energy can purify the sea water. There will be driverless cars. We can live under the sea. There are plenty of fish in the sea for us to eat.
I’m looking forward to that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我们未来的生活”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“工作、生活、学习、交通”等方面阐述。
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①study at home待在家里
②plenty of足够
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①We will have a lot of fresh water resources because solar energy can purify the sea water. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②There will be driverless cars. (There be句型)
9．例文
My experiences of visiting Beijing
Beijing is in the north of China. There are many places of interest there. A lot of people come to visit Beijing every year. I have been to Beijing many times. I have traveled around Beijing. I have climbed the Great Wall. I have visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. When I was there, I also had conversations with foreigners and I took lots of photos.
It was an interesting experience. I had a good time there. I love Beijing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为现在完成时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍游览北京的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍北京的位置以及自己游览北京的经历；
第二步，表达对这次游览经历感到愉快和对北京的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①in the north of 在……北部
②places of interest 风景名胜
③have conversations with 与……交谈
④have a good time 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
There are many places of interest there. (there be句型)
10．例文
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
It will be a large and bright room with large windows and plenty of natural light. The walls will be painted in calming colors like blue and green. What makes it “new” is the advanced technology it will have. There will be interactive whiteboards, tablets for each student, and virtual reality headsets for immersive learning experiences. Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你理想中教室的外观；
第二步，介绍教室中使其“新”的先进技术；
第三步，说明学生将如何利用这些技术进行学习；
第四步，表达你对理想教室的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①large and bright 宽敞明亮
②natural light 自然光
③interactive whiteboards 互动白板
④virtual reality headsets 虚拟现实头戴设备
⑤immersive learning experiences 沉浸式学习体验
[高分句型]
①I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. (现在分词作状语)
11．One possible version:
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
Shanxi lies in the north of China with Taiyuan as its capital city. It has a population of over 37 million. Have you ever tried Shanxi food Shanxi is famous for its food, such as sliced noodles, mutton soup and fried boiled pork. If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food. With a history of thousands of years, there are many places of interest in Shanxi, like Yungang Grottoes and Mount Wutai. These places are really worth visiting. Another great thing about Shanxi is that it has convenient transport. You can get here easily by plane. I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍并推荐Lucy来山西旅游；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 以……而闻名
②such as 例如
③be worth doing 值得做某事
④have a great time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．例文
Beautiful Tangshan
Tangshan is in the east of Hebei province. It has a history of over 17,000 years and a population of about 7.8 million. There are many places to visit in Tangshan. South Park offers wonderful live-action performances, and Tangshan Museum is a large and meaningful place for research, education, and culture. The local food, such as chess-shaped shaobing, is also very delicious. The people in Tangshan are friendly and welcoming.
Tangshan is a city full of charm and history, attracting more and more people from around the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，包括地理位置、历史、人口、旅游景点和特色食物。考生需要围绕这些要点进行写作，同时可以适度拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍唐山的地理位置和历史背景；
第二步，详细描述唐山的人口、旅游景点和特色食物；
第三步，可以对唐山的魅力进行总结，表达对家乡的热爱和赞美。
[亮点词汇]
①in the east of在……东边
②such as比如
③full of 充满
[高分句型]
South Park offers wonderful live-action performances, and Tangshan Museum is a large and meaningful place for research, education, and culture.（and并列句）
13．例文
The Cultural Symbol of Xiamen in My Eyes
I’m glad to know that we’re planning to introduce Xiamen through WeChat official accounts. I’d like to tell you the cultural symbol of Xiamen in my eyes.
In my opinion, Gulangyu Island is a cultural symbol of Xiamen. Gulangyu is famous for its well-preserved colonial architecture and beautiful natural scenery. The island is also known as the “Piano Island” because of its rich musical heritage. Walking through its streets, you can feel the blend of Chinese and Western cultures. This unique charm makes Gulangyu a must-visit place in Xiamen.
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图(开头已给出)；
第二步，具体介绍什么是厦门的文化标志，并叙述原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① In my opinion 在我看来
② be known as 作为……而出名
③ the blend of... ……的融合
[高分句型]
①Gulangyu is famous for its well-preserved colonial architecture and beautiful natural scenery.（并列结构）
②I hope my idea can be taken.（省略that的宾语从句）
14．例文
Welcome to my hometown-Bayan Nur
Nestled in the west of Inner Mongolia, Bayan Nur boasts a beautiful location with different weather. It’s cold in winter and warm in spring. There are many popular food here. You can taste delicious hot pot. Yogurt is also a staple in every meal. And of course, mutton dishes prepared with generations-old recipes satisfy even the most discerning palates. As for the sights, you can go to the freshwater lake in China. It’s Ulansuhai Nur. Walk along its shores and take in the wonderful views. The people of Bayan Nur are friendly and kind. They eager to share their stories, customs, and traditions.
In conclusion, Bayan Nur is a treasure of natural beauty and cultural experiences. Welcome to my hometown-Bayan Nur!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍我的家乡巴彦淖尔；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容,从“地理位置、气候、美食等”几个方面重点介绍家乡巴彦淖尔；
第三步，书写结语表达“欢迎来到我的家乡”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②eager to do渴望做某事
③In conclusion总而言之
[高分句型]
①There are many popular food here. (there be句型)
②And of course, mutton dishes prepared with generations-old recipes satisfy even the most discerning palates. (动词过去分词作后置定语)
15．例文
A Place I Have Been to Beijing
I have been to Beijing, the capital city of China, a place filled with history and culture.
Beijing is located in the northeastern part of China. It has a population of over 21 million people, making it one of the most populated cities in the world. The weather in Beijing is characterized by four distinct seasons.
Beijing is famous for its historical landmarks and cultural heritage. The landmark is the Great Wall. Other popular tourist attractions include the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, and the Temple of Heaven. The local dishes include Peking duck and Zhajiang noodles.
Overall, Beijing is a fascinating city with a rich cultural heritage. I would highly recommend visiting if you have the chance.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单说明去的哪个城市；
第二步，具体从位置、人口、天气等方面介绍该城市；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①fill with充满
②in the world在世界上
③be famous for因……闻名
[高分句型]
I would highly recommend visiting if you have the chance. (if引导的条件状语从句)
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