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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优译林版（2024）Unit 3 To be a good learner
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．学校英语报社针对学生的学习方式展开讨论，假如你是李华，请根据表格里提供的信息，选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。
Study in a group Study alone
Advantages share understanding with each other work together to solve problems motivate each other to focus keep to fixed learning plans focus completely on the material have full control over learning time develop self-control abilities form the habit of deep thinking
Disadvantages … …
要求：
（1）所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息并提出不足之处；
（2）文章不少于80词；
（3）语意通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
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2．亲爱的初三同学，经过两年多的初中学习，你一定在英语学习方面有很大收获和成长，请你结合以下提示，以“How to Learn English”为题写一篇英文短文，把你的英语学习经验介绍给初一、初二的同学们。
提示：
(1) Why should you learn English
(2) What is your advice to them
要求：
(1) 短文须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
(2) 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
(3) 词数80词左右。（题目和开头已给出，不计入词数。）
How to Learn English
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world.
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3．根据下面的问题提示，用英语以“My English Study”为题写一篇短文，介绍你是如何学英语的。
1. What were the difficult things in learning English
2. How did you solve the problems last year
3. How to learn English well
要求：1. 50词左右；2. 文中不得出现本人真实信息。
My English study
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4．好的英语学习方法能让学习更高效，帮助我们节省时间、深化对知识的理解，还能让学习过程更有条理，从而更快提升英语能力。
用英语写一篇作文，要求如下：
1. 首先介绍你常用的几种学习方法（比如做思维导图、整理错题、小组讨论等）。
2. 选取其中一种方法结合自身具体的学习经历（比如为准备一场考试、学习一门新学科时运用这个方法的过程）进行详细描述。
3. 阐述从这次经历中感悟到的这些学习方法带来的好处，以及对自己学习观念的影响。
4. 词数要求：80—120词左右，语言通顺、表意清晰。
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5．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris听说你马上要参加北京市第一次英语听说考试，想了解一下你平时是如何进行听说提升练习的。
提示词语：
practice, conversation, join, fluently (流畅地)
提示问题：
●How do you usually improve your listening and speaking English
●What have you achieved
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking learning.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．新学期，同学们进入了九年级。在开学伊始制订学习计划非常重要。合理的学习计划可以帮助我们在九年级取得好成绩。校英文报将举办主题为“My Study Plans for the New Term”的征文比赛，请你根据以下提示信息，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 在校内的学习计划 (至少两个)；
2. 在校外的学习计划 (至少两个)；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：preview (v.预习)，go over (复习)，actively (adv.积极地)
My Study Plans for the New Term
As the new term comes, we become the students in Grade 9. It’s important for us to make the study plans. Let me share my study plans with you.
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7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请根据下列要点写封回信。
1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节；3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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8．假设你是李华，你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查，并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按照下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。
项目 内容
你对英语的认识 1. 英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言； 2. 学英语有助于了解世界上不同的文化。
你目前的英语水平 1. 能用英语与同学进行交流； 2. 喜欢演讲，去年在演讲比赛中获奖；……
你在英语学习中存在的问题 1. 不能正确地遵循语法规则； 2. 写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己；……
你对英语教学的建议 ……（学生自己发挥，至少一点）
要求：(1) 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English.
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I hope our school will consider my advice.
9．你们学校的英语俱乐部正在开展以“科技与学习”为主题的征文比赛，征集使用AI工具(如DeepSeek, Kimi，豆包等)辅助学习的体验。请根据以下要点提示（也可自行拓展），以“Using AI tools to learn”为题写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
Using AI tools to learn
How can they help ● give suggestions ●provide some exercises
What should we be careful about ● not depend too much on ... ●check mistakes... carefully
Your opinion and reason ...
注意事项：
1.词数：80-100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Using AI tools to learn
AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways.
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10．假如你是Tom，你收到一份礼物叫我的学习小助手“ StudyMate”。请你根据以下表格的提示内容以“My StudyMate”为题写一篇作文，介绍你的学习小助手。
我的学习小助手 StudyMate
外观 一个手掌大小的设备，方便携带。
功能 1. 内有多种资源，如电子词典、在线课程等。 2. 时间管理，可以设置学习任务的提醒。 3. ……(补充一种功能)
影响 1. 学习上的影响。 2. 生活上的影响。
要求：80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。
生词：device设备
My StudyMate
I have just received a present called “StudyMate.”
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11．日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？请你结合下面表格信息，以“Studying alone or studying with a group”为题，根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
Studying alone Studying with a group
★ solve problems on my own ★ everyone helps each other in studies
★ keep my mind on my schoolwork ★ share ideas with group members
要求：1.短文须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现考生真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Studying alone or studying with a group
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
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12．英语是中学阶段的一门重要课程。但是，有的同学因学习方法不当而学习效果不佳；有的同学因畏惧困难而放弃了英语学习……针对这些现象，《学生英文报》展开了“怎样学好英语”的讨论。请你以“How to Learn English Well ”为题，谈谈你对英语学习的看法和学好英语的一些建议。
要求：
1.词数：80~100；
2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
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13．近期，“校园英语周” 将举行“好习惯，促成长”主题征文活动，请你以 “Good Learning Habits Make Me a Good English Learner”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示：
(1)在英语学习中，你有哪些好习惯；
(2)你在哪些方面还需要改进；
(3)你对自己未来的期待。
注意：
(1)词数80～100，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)短文须包括所给内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文章中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Good Learning Habits Make Me a Good English Learner
As we all know, good habits are very important in our daily life, especially to us students.
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14．假设你是阳光国际学校的李明。你的外教Tony给你发了一封邮件，向你了解温州方言的有关情况。请你结合自己的学习和生活经历，给他写一封回信。
Dear Li Ming, I’m interested when I heard you spoke Wenzhou dialect in the school. Can you tell me more about Wenzhou dialect Is it more difficult than Putonghua Would you please give me some suggestions on learning it Yours, Tony
注意：
1. 文中不能出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
2. 词数：90词左右。
Dear Tony,
I’m Li Ming. I’m very glad to hear that you’re interested in Wenzhou dialect.
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Hope my advice will help you. I am sure you can learn Wenzhou dialect well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
15．为了调动同学们学习英语的积极性，展现同学们英语学习的风采，学校英语社团Shining English Club举办了一个主题为“How to Improve Our English ”的演讲活动。请大家围绕这一主题创作一篇演讲稿，谈谈英语学习的重要性并分享好的英语学习方法帮助大家共同学好英语。
要求：
1. 卷面整洁，书写工整，语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯，不得出现真实姓名。
2. 全文字数不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总字数。
How to Improve Our English
Dear teachers and classmates,
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16．期末考试正在进行中，但在上次考试中，有的同学成绩不理想，因此有些焦虑，倍感压力。Jane正有这样的烦恼，假设你是她的好朋友李华，请写一封信给她，安慰她并给她一些缓解焦虑和压力的建议，鼓励她继续努力。
要点如下：
1. 早睡早起，健康饮食，积极锻炼。
2. 制定合理的复习计划。
3. 与他人交流，寻求帮助。
4. ……
要求：
(1) 包含以上要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺；
(2) 不少于 100词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数；)
(3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some pressure about your study and exams. Don’t be so worried. It’s normal to have these feelings. I’m writing to tell you some good ways to deal with it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
17．现在越来越多的外国人开始学习中文。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习中文，写信询问你学习中文的方法。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. 你的认识：中文有用且有趣，是世界上最重要的语言之一；
2. 你的建议：看中文电视节目、听磁带、多阅读中文书籍、尝试用中文写作。
3. 表达祝愿：……
注意：
1. 短文必须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Frank,
How’s it going You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．假设你是林涛，新学期开始了，你班将举行一次英语学习计划交流会，请以“My Plan for Learning English”为题用英语准备一篇发言稿，从发音、听力、语法和写作四个方面谈谈你新学期的英语学习计划。
要求：
1.句子通顺，条理清晰，无语法、单词拼写及标点符号错误。
2.所写发言稿内容与提示信息相符。
3.字数在80以上。
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19．英语课上，我们经常进行小组活动。但如何能让这些活动帮助我们把英语学得更好呢？现在，请以“How Can Group Activities Help Us Study Better ”为题并根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。
要点：1.活动的任务及完成方式要明确；
2.小组内要有不同的角色分工，要合作；
3.老师的帮助；
4.活动结果要在班上分享。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右。
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20．作为现代的中学生，我们应该学会学习，学会合作。新的《课程标准》也对我们的学习方式提出了新的要求：在学习中成长，在合作中提高。假如你校校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying in Groups”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
Studying in Groups
Studying in Groups learn from group members learn new ideas develop thinking skills develop a good habit of learning
Your opinions learn a lot, improve a lot
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Studying in Groups
Some students like to study alone, and some students enjoy studying in groups. As for me, I like to study in a group.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文
Dear listeners, I’m Li Hua. I’ve tried both studying in a group and studying alone, and I prefer the latter.
Studying alone helps me focus completely on the material. Without others around, I can pay full attention to books or exercises. I also have full control over my learning time—I can choose to study when I’m most energetic, whether in the morning or evening. This way, I’ve improved my self-control abilities, as I need to stick to my own plans. What’s more, it helps me form the habit of thinking deeply, which makes me understand knowledge better.
However, studying alone has a disadvantage. When I meet difficult problems, there’s no one to share ideas with immediately, so I might waste time stuck on them. But overall, it suits me best.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：选择一种学习方式，材料所给优点不得遗漏，缺点部分自行阐述。
[写作步骤]
① 第一步，表明自己喜欢的学习方式；
② 第二步，阐述该学习方式的优点；
③ 第三步，阐述该学习方式的缺点。
[亮点词汇]
① focus on集中
② pay full attention to充分注意
③ what’s more更重要的是；而且
[高分句型]
①What’s more, it helps me form the habit of thinking deeply, which makes me understand knowledge better.（定语从句）
②When I meet difficult problems, there’s no one to share ideas with immediately, so I might waste time stuck on them（when引导时间状语从句）
2．例文：
How to Learn English
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world. So it will be helpful for us to master it. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to English songs and watch English movies. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make. Third, we should read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should keep a diary in English.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明英语的重要性，引出关于学习英语的建议
第二步，具体介绍如何学好英语；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as possible尽可能多
②be afraid of害怕
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make.（“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构）
②In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.（“as long as”引导条件状语从句）
3．One possible version:
My English Study
Some students think it’s very difficult to study English. Now I will tell you something about my English study.
When I entered the middle school last year, I had much trouble with my English. I couldn’t understand my teacher in class, and I couldn’t remember the words and the sentences. For a time, I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible.
Now my English is much better. In my opinion, we must work hard at English. Read, listen and speak more, and we can improve our English soon.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述自己在英语学习方面的困难以及解决办法；
第三步，书写结语，总结学好英语的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble with... 在某方面有麻烦
②give up 放弃
③with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下
④as much as possible 尽可能多的
⑤keep on doing 坚持做某事
[高分句型]
①Some students think it’s very difficult to study English. (it’s adj to do句型，it为形式主语，to do作真正的主语)
②When I entered the middle school last year, I had much trouble with my English. (when引导时间状语从句)
4．例文
Useful English Learning Methods
Good learning methods can make English study more efficient. I often use mind maps to organize grammar points, keep error notebooks for mistakes, and join group discussions to practice speaking.
Last term, I used mind maps to prepare for the English final exam. I listed tenses as the main branch, then added sub-branches like usages, signal words, and example sentences. This helped me clearly see the connections between different tenses.
From this experience, I found mind maps made complex knowledge easier to remember. They also taught me that organizing information well is as important as memorizing it. Now I use such methods regularly to improve my English quickly.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍英语学习方法；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主，描述常用学习方法和当前习惯；涉及过去经历时使用“一般过去时”；
③提示：介绍常用英语学习方法，结合具体经历说明方法的作用及带来的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指出好的学习方法能提升英语学习效率，并列举三种常用方法。
第二步，选取“思维导图”这一方法，结合上学期准备英语期末考试的具体经历，描述使用过程。
第三步，总结该方法带来的好处及对自身学习观念的影响，说明现在会定期使用这类方法提升英语。
[亮点词汇]
①efficient高效的
②organize整理；组织
③sub-branch分支；子分支
④connection联系；关联
[高分句型]
①I often use mind maps to organize grammar points, keep error notebooks for mistakes, and join group discussions to practice speaking. (运用排比结构列举三种学习方法，句式整齐，条理清晰，体现了方法的多样性。)
②From this experience, I found mind maps made complex knowledge easier to remember. (使用“find+宾语+宾语补足语”结构，简洁明了地表达从经历中得出的结论，符合英语表达习惯。)
5．例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking learning. I usually improve them by practicing regularly. Every morning, I listen to English tapes and repeat after them. After school, I join the English corner to have conversations with my classmates. Since I started doing these, I have achieved a lot. Now I can understand English stories more easily and speak English more fluently. I feel confident about the coming exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己平时是如何进行听说提升练习的；
第二步，介绍自己取得的成果；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①after school放学后
②start doing sth开始做某事
③confident自信的
[高分句型]
Since I started doing these, I have achieved a lot. (since引导的时间状语从句)
6． My Study Plans for the New Term
As the new term comes, we become the students in Grade 9. It’s important for us to make the study plans. Let me share my study plans with you.
At school, I plan to preview new lessons every evening. This helps me understand what the teacher says in class the next day. I also decide to take part in class discussions actively. When I have questions, I’ll ask my teachers or classmates in time. After school, I’ll go over the knowledge I learned that day for 30 minutes every night. On weekends, I want to read more English books and watch English videos. This can improve my English skills. I hope with these plans, I can get better grades in Grade 9. I’ll try my best to stick to them!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明背景与主题，说明新学期到来且自己成为九年级学生，强调制定学习计划的重要性，并引出要分享自己的学习计划这一核心内容；
第二步，分场景详细阐述具体的学习计划，先介绍在学校的学习计划，再说明放学后的复习计划，接着描述周末提升英语的计划，从不同时间段展开，逻辑清晰；
第三步，结尾表达对计划的期望，希望通过这些计划在九年级取得更好成绩，并表明会尽力坚持执行计划的决心，收束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make the study plans 制定学习计划
②preview new lessons 预习新课
③take part in 参与
④go over 复习
⑤stick to 坚持
[高分句型]
①This helps me understand what the teacher says in class the next day.（what引导宾语从句）
②On weekends, I want to read more English books and watch English videos.（“and” 并列两个动词短语）
7．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try to write to me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于文章开头已给出，故接下来具体说明如何学好中文；
第二步，提出一些学好中文的建议；
第三步，鼓励Peter尝试用中文写信。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from向……学习
②practice练习
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.（because引导的原因状语从句）
8．例文
I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English.
I think English is the most widely used language in the world. Learning English helps us understand different cultures in the world. At present I can communicate with my classmates in English. I also like speeches. I won a prize in the speech contest last year. I believe English can help me improve my communication skills. However, I have some problems with learning English. I can’t follow the grammar rules correctly. Sometimes I can’t express myself clearly in writing. I often find it hard to remember more new words. At last, I think teachers should communicate with us in English more in class.
I hope our school will consider my advice.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开头通过自我介绍，引出对英语的思考这一话题，为下文的阐述做铺垫。
第二步，先说明英语的重要性，再介绍自身的英语学习情况，接着指出学习中遇到的问题，最后针对性地提出建议，希望老师在课堂上多和学生用英语交流。
第三步，书写结语。以希望学校考虑自己的建议收尾。
［亮点词汇］
①widely used 广泛使用的
②different cultures 不同的文化
③communicate with 和…… 交流
④speech contest 演讲比赛
⑤win a prize 获奖
⑥communication skills 沟通技巧
⑦grammar rules 语法规则
⑧express oneself 表达自己
⑨remember new words 记新单词
⑩consider one’s advice 考虑某人的建议
［高分句型］
I think English is the most widely used language in the world.（宾语从句）
9．例文
Using AI tools to learn
AI tools are helpful for students to learn in many ways. When we have study problems, they can give suggestions, like offering proper learning methods for different subjects. Also, they provide different kinds of exercises, which helps us practice and improve.
However, we should be careful. Don’t depend too much on AI. Its answers might have mistakes. So, we need to check carefully.
In my opinion, AI tools are great helpers. They make learning more efficient, but we must use them wisely. Only by combining our own efforts with AI’s assistance can we truly master knowledge.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍AI工具对学生学习的帮助，例如提供建议、练习等；
第二步，再介绍使用AI工具时的注意事项，包括别过度依赖、仔细检查错误等；
第三步，表达自己的观点和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①learning methods 学习方法
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③improve 改善，提高
④efficient 有效率的
⑤wisely 明智地
⑥combine...with... 把……与……结合
⑦assistance 协助
[高分句型]
①When we have study problems, they can give suggestions, like offering proper learning methods for different subjects. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Also, they provide different kinds of exercises, which helps us practice and improve. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③Only by combining our own efforts with AI’s assistance can we truly master knowledge. (倒装句)
10．例文：
My StudyMate
I have just received a present called “StudyMate.”
It’s as small as my hand, so I can carry it anywhere. StudyMate is helpful in many ways. It has an E-dictionary and online classes. It can help me plan my study time. With a schedule, it reminds me of the tasks so that I am able to do everything on time. In addition, StudyMate can record voices. When I want to record lectures or important discussions, it will help me. And I can listen to these recordings later to review them. StudyMate has made my school life easier. I can look up the words and watch lessons anytime. It’s a big help for my English and maths. Now, I study better and have more free time. In my daily life, StudyMate is also very useful. It helps me manage my time and stay on top of my tasks. Whether it’s remembering friends’ birthdays or doing housework, StudyMate is always there to help me. StudyMate is a great invention.
Thanks to it, I’m doing great in and out of school and having fun too!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括外观、功能（已给出两种，需补充一种）以及影响（学习和生活两方面），考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。用一句话引出要介绍的学习小助手。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。描述其外观、功能和影响。
第三步：书写结语。表达对设备的感激和喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①in many ways在许多方面
②in addition此外
③look up查阅
[高分句型]
①With a schedule, it reminds me of the tasks so that I am able to do everything on time. (so that引导结果状语从句)
②When I want to record lectures or important discussions, it will help me. (when引导时间状语从句)
11．例文
Studying alone or studying with a group
Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.
As for me, I prefer studying with a group. First of all, I can receive support from others when I face difficult problems. My group members always give me useful advice and solutions. Secondly, studying with a group allows me to share ideas. Through discussion, I can learn different ways of thinking and improve my understanding of the subject. Finally, studying together makes learning more fun, less stressful, and helps me feel motivated and confident.
In conclusion, I believe studying with a group is an excellent and effective way to learn.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，结合自身实际，选择学习方式——小组学习；
第二步，陈述理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
③In conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①First of all, I can receive support from others when I face difficult problems.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Secondly, studying with a group allows me to share ideas.（动名词作主语）
③In conclusion, I believe studying with a group is an excellent and effective way to learn.（宾语从句）
12．例文
How to learn English well
With the development of society, English has become more and more important in our daily life. How can we learn it well Now, I will give you some suggestions.
Firstly, you should practice listening as much as possible. It is said that practice makes perfect. You can listen to the tapes or do lots of listening practice. Secondly, it’s necessary to improve your speaking by practicing conversations with friends and you can read aloud to practice pronunciation. Thirdly, you’d better choose some good materials which you are interested in to read, such as English stories, newspapers and magazines. Reading textbooks after the tape is also a good choice. Last but not least, keeping an English diary every day or writing to pen pals in English is an effective way to improve your writing ability.
If you are confident in yourself and practice your English in this way, I’m sure you will make great progress in English one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：结合现实情况，谈谈自己对英语学习的看法和学好英语的一些建议。可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开篇点题，说明学习英语的现状；
第二步，给出学习英语的建议；
第三步，总结，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of society随着社会的发展
②more and more越来越
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, you’d better choose some good materials which you are interested in to read.（which引导的定语从句）
②I’m sure you will make great progress in English one day.（宾语从句）
13．例文
Good Learning Habits Make Me a Good English Learner
As we all know, good habits are very important in our daily life, especially to us students. As for me, I have some good habits in English learning.
Firstly, I often read English aloud in the morning to practise pronunciation. Secondly, I like listening to English songs in my spare time. In this way, my listening improves a lot. However, I also have something that I need to improve. For example, I’m afraid of making mistakes when I speak English in class. Besides that, when I meet new words, I hardly ever look them up in a dictionary. So I have difficulty in understanding English novels and magazines.
From now on, I will develop more good habits in English learning. I hope I will get better grades and make greater progress in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，提出自己也有一些好的学习习惯，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述在英语学习中，自己有哪些好习惯以及需要改进的方面；
第三步，书写结语，表达对自己未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①as for 至于
②in my spare time 在我的业余时间
③need to do 需要做某事
④be afraid of 害怕
⑤make mistakes 犯错误
⑥look...up in a dictionary 查字典
⑦have difficulty in doing 做某事有困难
⑧make progress 取得进步
[高分句型]
①Firstly, I often read English aloud in the morning to practise pronunciation. (to do作目的状语)
②However, I also have something that I need to improve. (that引导定语从句)
③For example, I’m afraid of making mistakes when I speak English in class. (when引导时间状语从句)
④I hope I will get better grades and make greater progress in the future. (that省略的宾语从句)
14．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m Li Ming. I’m very glad to hear that you’re interested in Wenzhou dialect.
Wenzhou dialect has a very long history and it’s very important to Wenzhou people. I often talk with my grandparents in Wenzhou dialect. I think Wenzhou dialect is more difficult than Putonghua. Here is some advice for you to learn it better.
First, you’d better listen and practise as much as possible. It’s a good idea to talk with your students. Second, why not watch some Wenzhou local TV programs, which will help you learn it better. Third, I suggest that you buy a book about Wenzhou dialect to know more about the culture behind it.
Hope my advice will help you. I am sure you can learn Wenzhou dialect well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：介绍学习温州方言的好方法，并给予托尼祝愿。适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍自己；收到对方来信，获悉对方对温州方言感兴趣，引出话题；
第二步，介绍温州方言情况，回答来信所提问题，引出写信目的；
第三步，结合自己的实际情况，具体介绍学习温州方言的建议；
第四步，总结全文，相信对方学能好温州方言。
［亮点词汇］
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② as much as possible 尽可能多
［高分句型］
① It’s a good idea to talk with your students.（it是形式主语，不定式是真正的主语）
② Second, why not watch some Wenzhou local TV programs, which will help you learn it better.（定语从句）
15．例文
How to Improve Our English
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good afternoon! Today, I’m honored to share my thoughts on how to improve our English.
First, practice every day. Read English books, watch English movies, or listen to English songs. This helps improve our vocabulary and pronunciation. Second, speak as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes—practice with friends or join English conversations. Third, keep a diary in English. Writing every day helps us to use grammar and vocabulary correctly.
Remember, confidence is the key. Let’s enjoy learning English and make progress together!
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍如何提高英语；
第二步，介绍了每天练习、多讲英语、写英语日记这三种学习方法；
第三步，书写结语，提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of害怕
②keep a diary写日记
③make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
Let’s enjoy learning English and make progress together! (祈使句)
16．例文
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some pressure about your study and exams. Don’t be so worried. It’s normal to have these feelings. I’m writing to tell you some good ways to deal with it.
First of all, keeping a healthy lifestyle is important. Go to bed early and get up early. A balanced diet with enough fruits, vegetables and grains can provide you with the energy you need. Also, do some exercise regularly, like running or playing badminton. It can not only build up your body but also relax your mind. Secondly, make a proper review plan. List out all the subjects and divide your study time reasonably. This can help you study more efficiently and make you feel more in-control of your learning. Moreover, don’t hesitate to communicate with others. Talk to your teachers when you have problems with study. They can give you useful advice. Share your feelings with your classmates, too. You may find that you’re not alone in this. Remember, every setback is a step towards success. Keep working hard and I’m sure you’ll get good results in the upcoming exams.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点围绕缓解学习和考试压力的方法展开，涵盖健康生活方式、合理复习计划、与人沟通等内容，表达了对对方的关心与鼓励，未遗漏关键要点，且有适当的细节补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，表达对Jane的关心和安慰；
第二步，分三点给出建议，包括：健康的生活方式；复习计划和交流求助；
第三步，最后鼓励Jane。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理，应对
②balanced diet均衡饮食
③hesitate to犹豫做某事
[高分句型]
①Talk to your teachers when you have problems with study.（when引导时间状语从句）
②List out all the subjects and divide your study time reasonably.（and连接两个祈使句，构成并列结构）
17．例文：
Dear Frank,
How’s it going You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter. Chinese is not only useful but also very interesting. It’s one of the most important languages in the world.
There’re many ways to learn Chinese. First, you can watch Chinese TV programs or listen to tapes. Second, read Chinese books more. The more you read, the better you’ll learn Chinese. Third, keep a diary and try to write as much as possible in Chinese. Last but not least, you should try to use Chinese every day wherever you go.
I think you’ll learn Chinese well one day. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点围绕学习中文的方法展开，涵盖多种学习方式，可适当补充相关细节，突出学习中文这一核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先回应 Frank 在来信中提及的关于学习中文方法的问题，并简述中文的重要性和趣味性。
第二步，再具体阐述学习中文的多种方法，包括看中文电视节目、听磁带、多阅读中文书籍、坚持写中文日记以及日常使用中文等。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不仅……而且……
②as much as possible尽可能多地
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①Chinese is not only useful but also very interesting.（not only...but also... 连接两个形容词作表语）
②The more you read, the better you’ll learn Chinese.（“the + 比较级，the + 比较级” 结构，表示 “越……，越……”）
18．例文
Hello everyone, I’m Lin Tao. The new term has started, and I’d like to share my plan for learning English.
First, I’ll improve my pronunciation. I’ll listen to English tapes every morning and repeat after them. I’ll also ask my teacher for help when I’m not sure about a sound. For listening, I plan to listen to English cartoons and news for 20 minutes every day. It can help me get used to different accents and understand spoken English better. Grammar is important too. I’ll learn one grammar rule each week and do some exercises to practice it. I’ll write down the mistakes I make and review them regularly. To improve my writing, I’ll keep a diary in English. I’ll write about my daily life or feelings, and ask my teacher to check it for me. I hope to learn some useful sentences and use them in my writing.
I believe my English will get better with this plan. Let’s work hard together!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求先从发音和听力谈谈新学期的英语学习计划。
第二步，再从语法和写作谈谈新学期的英语学习计划。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for help 请求帮助
②plan to do 计划做某事
③write down 写下
[高分句型]
①I’ll also ask my teacher for help when I’m not sure about a sound.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I’ll write down the mistakes I make and review them regularly.（定语从句）
19．例文：
How Can Group Activities Help Us Study Better
In English class, we often have group activities. But how can the activities help us study English better
First, we must make it clear what the task is for each group and how it should be done. Second, each group member must play a different role and the whole group should cooperate well. At the same time, teachers should offer necessary help to each group during activities. Finally, the activity results must be shared in class because they are our achievements.
In this way, we will probably study English better.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇议论文，讨论小组活动对英语学习的帮助；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，注意需围绕四个要点展开，适当加入个人观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明小组活动对英语学习的重要性；
第二步：分点说明有效开展小组活动的具体方法；
第三步：总结强调小组活动的积极意义。
[亮点词汇]
① play a different role扮演不同角色
② at the same time同时
③ in this way用这种方法
[高分句型]
① First, we must make it clear what the task is for each group and how it should be done.（宾语从句）
② Second, each group member must play a different role and the whole group should cooperate well.（并列句）
③ Finally, the activity results must be shared in class because they are our achievements.（原因状语从句）
20．例文
Studying in Groups
Some students like to study alone, and some students enjoy studying in groups. As for me, I like to study in groups.
Group study helps me learn from my classmates. When we work together, I can hear new ideas and different ways to solve problems. This makes my thinking skills better. Also, discussing with others helps me develop good learning habits like listening carefully and sharing opinions.
Last month, my group worked on a science project. We shared ideas and learned many new things. I believe studying in groups helps us learn more and improve faster. It’s really helpful!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：完整包含了题目要求的四个要点（向组员学习、获得新想法、发展思维能力、培养学习习惯），并添加了具体事例；
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，表明自己支持小组学习的态度；
第二步：具体阐述小组学习的好处；
第三步：总结观点，强调小组学习的优势。
[亮点词汇]
① learn from向……学习
② solve problems解决问题
③ help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
When we work together, I can hear new ideas and different ways to solve problems.（时间状语从句）
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